Uzamaki-girl
Monday 13th August 2007 19:26 | Requiem of the Phoenix |
| I had guessed that Dobby was the secret keeperr, becuase next to Ron and Hermione he's one of Harry's most loyalist friends. Great chapter. |
| Monday 20th August 2007 17:32 | Requiem of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
Well, that is a good guess. Hopefully the truth didn't surprise you too much in Atto 4. Although, Atto 5 has most of the answers.
thanks for reading
-Jonathan |
Substantia1979
Monday 13th August 2007 13:11 | Requiem of the Phoenix |
| Wow! Amazing story! Your style really pulled me in, and I felt like I was watching a movie as I read. I anxiously await the next act. |
| Monday 20th August 2007 17:30 | Requiem of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
My background is in film and video production so I tend to write as if I were watching a film at times, especially when I choose shorter formats such as RoP. And I really meant for this story to feel like a quick play, a sort of snap, snap, snap, snap pace that has a fewslow moments to just let you catch your breath.
thanks a lot. |
eaglesnest
Monday 13th August 2007 10:47 | Requiem of the Phoenix |
I'm always intrigued at how an author can so skillfully weave a puzzle into a series of battle scenes. My feeble mind is not in shape to work this one out, so I will turn to an other alternative. I will hope and pray thaat H/H/J miraculously escape Voldeorts last curse and they are just in a temporary holding place until they recover and are ready to resume their journey. I really liked your twist that H/G knew Harry wa a horcrux and that they planned the sacrifice in order to dispose of Voldemort and to save James so that he could continue on under R/Hr's guardianship.
Top notch story, but now, I expect no less whenever I see one of your postings. |
| Monday 20th August 2007 17:28 | Requiem of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
Well having the whole picture does help a lot. Also the choice of perspective is always the clincher in most mystery stories. You need a protagonist who is in the dark but interested enough to follow through to the end.
You'll have your other answers soon. I'm just working out a few wording and continuity issues out with my beta team on the next part.
And I promise to keep up the good work. |
GhostWriter
Monday 13th August 2007 07:10 | Requiem of the Phoenix |
Noooooo!
JKR spared them all. You just can't kill them. |
| Monday 13th August 2007 08:54 | Requiem of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
Well technically, Rowling did kill Harry. But the next chapter just went in for posting, so hopefully it will be up on the site in a day or so. Things happen for a reason in my stories, and all the clues are already there.
Good luck with finding the correct answer for what happened.
-Jonathan |
666rastas666
Sunday 12th August 2007 23:49 | Requiem of the Phoenix |
More More more.............please we need more, you can't leave it like this.
Brilliant installment, can't wait for the next chapter.
Love does conquer all eventually. |
| Monday 13th August 2007 08:51 | Requiem of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
The next chapter has already been sent in for posting. The chapter after that is in final beta and I am just making some minor tweaks on the Epilogue.
Glad I have you on the edge of your seat.
Thanks,
Jonathan |
