Jacynthe
Monday 21st January 2008 22:42 | Smoke |
| Why it took me so long to get round to reading this i can't imagine, but I'm glad I found it. Very spare and efficient with no word out of place. |
pyromain
Tuesday 4th September 2007 13:02 | Smoke |
| now the shoe is on the other foot. |
RIPHedwig
Monday 3rd September 2007 06:35 | Smoke |
| ive just read that peiece for the second time and i cant believe i havent alredy reviewed it. it was so good... easy going, short and sharp, but so truthful and just SO good! please write more like this, i just loved it! |
pumpkinpasty
Friday 24th August 2007 13:15 | Smoke |
HAI I KNOW YOU.
Waugh, sometimes -- sometimes I wonder how your writing can be so. . amazing. Really. This was gorgeous the first time, and the second time, and the third. It never gets old, and that's why you're brilliant. |
nundu
Thursday 23rd August 2007 09:51 | Smoke |
This is a wonderful piece! I usually get bored with 'random, freeflowing thoughts', but yours kept me captivated. You captured the characters wonderfully and the last paragraph is perfect.
I keep saying wonderful. You'd think as a fellow writer I could think of something better, but I can't. It's just a lovely, lovely piece. |
ilovecats
Wednesday 22nd August 2007 15:43 | Smoke |
| That was beautiful. A full circle ending, and I absolutly loved how it kept coming back to Ginny, like he loved her all the time. |
ibelieveintruelove
Wednesday 22nd August 2007 15:07 | Smoke |
Oh that is such a good story! I love the style in which it was written, the different ways that you depicted the girls in Harry's life. It also kind of just struck me that technically Ginny was the first girl to come into Harry's life in the wizarding world, and makes their relationship even more special to me.
Very heartfelt and sweet, I enjoyed it immensely |
mary-v
Wednesday 22nd August 2007 11:16 | Smoke |
| This was beautiful, it flowed like a poem but better somehow! And that last paragraph really got me! Awesome! |
freshwater
Tuesday 21st August 2007 17:09 | Smoke |
| Not your typical story....something more interesting. Very nice collection of details and impressions. Reminds me of the saying "We don't remember days...we remember moments." Excellent summary of "Harry's girls". |
cman
Monday 20th August 2007 18:02 | Smoke |
| Definitely different, and I liked it. |
GryffindorDragon
Monday 20th August 2007 07:34 | Smoke |
Very nicely done.
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Grandma Kate
Monday 20th August 2007 04:49 | Smoke |
| You've captured Harry's girls and brought back a lot of memories. |
Hihavaniceda
Monday 20th August 2007 02:28 | Smoke |
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