HarryandGinny Fan
Saturday 25th August 2007 10:59 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows |
| I was just curious as to how you came up with the name Deathly Hallows, then? |
| Sunday 26th August 2007 03:16 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (Author Response) |
| wait patiently for the 11th chapter, and you'll find out. :thumbs up: |
pixie7
Saturday 25th August 2007 07:20 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows |
Interesting chapter as always
Tho i would like to know how come everything seems to be on a run away train, i would have thought that Harry would atleast be in shock over the deaths of his aunt & uncle, even though theres no love lost between them, & how could he not have mentioned it to Ron & Hermione.
Oh and another thing how come Harry so readily accepted Ginny joining them, Where is that noble personality that always wants her to be safe.
Also i wud have atleast expected them to wait a day or two after the wedding before leaving to search for the horcruxes.
looking forward to the next chapter |
| Sunday 26th August 2007 03:15 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (Author Response) |
Pixie7:
It's on a runaway train for 2 reasons: I can't write filler, and do you really expect Voldemort, after having years to plan, would really not just put his plans in effect, one after the other?
However, I do accept the things you're talking about with grief. There's one very important factor in that that has yet to come into play, so that might just alter that view. |
Belthazor
Saturday 25th August 2007 02:48 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows |
| I was about to say the same as AriesGirl. |
| Saturday 25th August 2007 02:51 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (Author Response) |
| Ah ha. Two reviews saying the same thing? Now I know I need filler! |
AriesGirl
Friday 24th August 2007 09:58 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows |
Hi there, love the way the new story plot is going.
I am expecting to see more use of descriptive words with your story.
so far I get the point , and the point is good. It's just that everyone is moving too fast. Harrys Aunt and uncle are dead, which should have been a little bit of a shock. And he never mentions it to his best friends when he sees them? The wedding scene was off to a good start , but who showed up?
Who sat together? Did the twins bring dates? In other - words Harry left his home, watched death eaters kill his aunt & uncle, went to the burrow attended a wedding grabbed his friends and left. The way it is going so far , this story is going to be finished very soon. It needs more filling.
realy am looking foward to your next installment. Just wrote so much because you seemed to be looking for someone to say a little more than
(Love Your Book) |
| Friday 24th August 2007 17:04 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (Author Response) |
Exactly the type I was looking for! Thank you, AriesGirl!
I shall take all you said into immense consideration. Filler coming up! I tend to get to the point rather than waffle on, which most people find annoying. I shall keep this in mind! |
