gymnastgal19
Monday 26th November 2007 06:50 | Lily's Discovery |
hehe cute severus really liked lily huh?
|
Seedy_Bea
Friday 28th September 2007 04:00 | Lily's Discovery |
| This is so cool. Everyone loves me! |
ibelieveintruelove
Wednesday 26th September 2007 05:03 | Lily's Discovery |
| Oh that was a good story! I love Lily and this discovery of her magic certainly filled in some gaps left by the book. Great job! |
| Friday 28th September 2007 03:57 | Lily's Discovery (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much! This is my first ever batch of proper postings, I'm so happy everyone's liking it. |
the_Critic
Tuesday 25th September 2007 14:46 | Lily's Discovery |
Awesome story, only complaint is the ending, which seems a little abrupt. Otherwise it is very wonderfuly well writtem, and completely understandable, (Atleast from our muggle point of veiw,) I also really love the confersation between Lily's parents.
Great Job!
|
| Friday 28th September 2007 03:59 | Lily's Discovery (Author Response) |
| Yes, I know! It was going to be much, much longer (I started it before DH) and then all my ideas got canonballed! |
RIPHedwig
Tuesday 25th September 2007 13:48 | Lily's Discovery |
ahh that was nice and very well written. good to have something that makes me smile, not cry, for a change.
loved the last line:
"And the rest, as they say, is history."
i love how everyone knows what happens next - well, all those who have read DH - which is practically everyone, anyway.
|
lantis222
Tuesday 25th September 2007 13:30 | Lily's Discovery |
| Very good, I liked it. You should definately write more! |
Spinnet
Tuesday 25th September 2007 11:50 | Lily's Discovery |
| That was really nice. I wish it was more than this one story... You seem to have a good feel for Lily's character! The whole scenario with the mum was very realistic! Great job |
