aggiebell
Thursday 22nd November 2007 17:08 | Possessing Ginny Weasley |
Oh. (That's a good 'Oh,' btw. I'm left a little speechless, I think.)
You know, we get so wrapped up in what Harry's going through that we (or I, at least) tend to forget about what Ginny went through that year. This was very well done -- from how Ginny felt when she first found the diary (I really liked that you had her be cautious about writing in it at first), to her feelings when she found herself not knowing what she'd been doing to her absolute panic when she discovered Harry had the diary. Tom is creepy and frightening and I think you do an excellent job showing how he just wore her down at the end.
Very nice bit of writing.
~Julie
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jmperreira
Friday 16th November 2007 22:48 | Possessing Ginny Weasley |
| That story was awesome. keep writing. |
Windsong
Monday 12th November 2007 03:16 | Possessing Ginny Weasley |
Nicely done!
It remains one of the mysteries of the whole series to me that JKR never wrote anything herself about Ginnys POV of her first year. At the very least you would have thought Harry might have talked to her about it?
Still, it leaves the way clear for wonderful missing moments like this.
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ladybug
Thursday 25th October 2007 21:46 | Possessing Ginny Weasley |
| Oooh, that final paragraph is so creepy - it gives me the shivers! Very nicely done, all through. |
| Tuesday 20th November 2007 09:40 | Possessing Ginny Weasley (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Of course, I wouldn't have a story on phoenixsong if it wasn't for my Beta, guruvee. |
myketje
Thursday 25th October 2007 08:20 | Possessing Ginny Weasley |
not bad. it makes sense!
thxs for this piece!
kiss kiss
mee
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| Thursday 25th October 2007 19:36 | Possessing Ginny Weasley (Author Response) |
"Not bad."
I'll take it. |
Grandma Kate
Wednesday 24th October 2007 17:20 | Possessing Ginny Weasley |
| Quite well done. You lead us through the events that lead to Ginny on the floor of the Chamber, losing all of her vitality to Tom. |
| Thursday 25th October 2007 19:37 | Possessing Ginny Weasley (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
lantis222
Wednesday 24th October 2007 11:46 | Possessing Ginny Weasley |
| Very good, I liked this a lot. I hope you will write more in the future. Poor Ginny, I feel so sad for her right now. Great job! |
| Thursday 25th October 2007 19:38 | Possessing Ginny Weasley (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I liked writing it! I have another four or so stories posted at MuggleNet FanFiction if you're interested. |
legobean
Wednesday 24th October 2007 10:52 | Possessing Ginny Weasley |
Nice story, I like it.
You were able to carry us along on Ginny's journey. It's very concise without being rushed. |
| Thursday 25th October 2007 19:39 | Possessing Ginny Weasley (Author Response) |
| Thanks. It's been a long-standing goal of mine to get a story posted on this site. Now I have, and it's been picking up favourable reviews. Amazing! |
Antosha
Tuesday 23rd October 2007 23:56 | Possessing Ginny Weasley |
| Well done—sad, believable and eerie. |
| Thursday 25th October 2007 19:35 | Possessing Ginny Weasley (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! I appreciate your review. I had so much fun writing this! |
