ngayonatkailanman
Thursday 11th December 2008 06:07 | Interlude |
Home. You know, it is a fact of life.... I do feel like Harry at this moment in time. Reading this chapter just brought into focus my personal need of a home.
A very poignant and emotionally charged chapter. |
kash2210
Wednesday 24th September 2008 16:41 | Interlude |
'Lavender swept down upon Harry and gave him a bone-crushing hug. Out of the corner of his eye, Harry saw Hermione pointedly slide her chair closer to Ron' - Nice line, glad to see Hermione marking her territory, lol!
Nice to see them 4 getting their chocolate frog cards, although it's very early! Still the story's progressing nicely! |
majolie
Monday 21st July 2008 18:37 | Interlude |
| Very nice ... I really enjoyed the real estate guy. And the meeting up with Lavender. |
eternal_twilight88
Friday 1st February 2008 01:27 | Interlude |
I loved this story! Good job! I'll keep on reading the others.
+ and + forever! |
| Sunday 1st June 2008 17:28 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I just sent in a new chapter to be beta-ed...hope to get it up for you soon. |
PhoenixAnkaa
Tuesday 1st January 2008 20:28 | Interlude |
This is a wonderful start so far. I greatly enjoyed reading your story so far and can't wait to see where your vision leads us. Thank you for sharing!
PA |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:28 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Thank you for reviewing! I'm looking forward to writing more and hearing your thoughts. |
jennvellcs
Monday 31st December 2007 11:54 | Interlude |
| I LOVE IT! Please continue! |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:29 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you loved it! A new chapter will be up very soon! |
snuffles007
Sunday 30th December 2007 15:11 | Interlude |
| Fantastic chapter! I really can't wait for more. Keep it up! |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:31 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| More is on its way. Thanks for reviewing! |
tknott
Saturday 29th December 2007 20:22 | Interlude |
| Excellent story, please keep it going. |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:33 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Glad you enjoyed it, expect an update soon. |
Snowflake24
Friday 28th December 2007 05:08 | Interlude |
| This was really well written, I love the new additions to chocolate frog cards! I hope for updates soon- hint, hint. |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:38 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked the chocolate frogs! Look for another update very soon! |
The_Critic
Thursday 27th December 2007 21:36 | Interlude |
Rita Skeeter decided to write a book called Harry Potter: Hero or Hothead? AHA! I think I have an exelent plot bunny... Anyone wanna write it?
Oh P.S.
Great CHapter! |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:40 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Haha! I would LOVE it if someone wrote Harry Potter: Hero or Hothead, or at least an excerpt from it. Thanks for reviewing! |
Trismegistus
Thursday 27th December 2007 20:05 | Interlude |
I enjoyed this. Thank you. You have a keen sense of the Potterverse and push things forward naturally and thus believably.
(If you are interested in keeping within canon, JKR has said in a very recent interview that Harry and Ron go into the Auror Dept. immediately. Hermione does go back to Hogwarts. See the podcast Pottercast #130 and #131.) |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:42 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! Thanks also for the podcast references...I was aware of those, but unfortunately JKR came out with some things after I had finished working out this story which don't quite go along with my outline. I'm going to go with my original plan, even though some of it may not work out exactly with what JKR has said in recent interviews. Thanks again though! |
Gardengirl
Thursday 27th December 2007 19:16 | Interlude |
| I liked this very much! It's great to see some realistic treatment of what happened between the final chapter and the epilogue. I hope there will be more forthcoming soon. |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:44 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! I tried very hard to make this chapter a realistic continuation of the final chapter of DH. Thanks for reviewing! |
southatxchris
Thursday 27th December 2007 06:02 | Interlude |
| great start, looking foreward to seeing where this one is going! |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:45 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Look back for updates soon. |
chiantiqueen
Thursday 27th December 2007 02:29 | Interlude |
| I really enjoyed reading this chapter, keep up the good work! I look forward to the next one |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:47 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter should be up very soon! |
Steven Carnell
Thursday 27th December 2007 02:08 | Interlude |
| So good. Beautifully written and has lots of promise for a great story. |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:46 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much for the kind words! |
laura c
Wednesday 26th December 2007 22:45 | Interlude |
| What a wonderful find your story is! The Chocolate frog card of Nevile was great, although you should have told us what they wrote about him!. Keep it up. It's the best I've read of authentic post-DH. I'm really looking forward to see where you take them, especially Harry, from here. |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:45 | Interlude (Author Response) |
Glad you liked Neville's chocolate frog card...I wanted to leave what was written about him to the imagination, though.
It's the best I've read of authentic post-DH. I'm flattered! Thanks for reviewing! |
damabeth
Wednesday 26th December 2007 22:09 | Interlude |
| Oh you have me hooked! Grandma Beth |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:43 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Glad to hear it! Thanks for reviewing! |
Grandma Kate
Wednesday 26th December 2007 16:31 | Interlude |
| I re-read this chapter with the same delight as when I first read it. It's nice to see it at Phoenix Song. |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:38 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Thank you! It's nice to be here at Phoenix Song. |
Emmy-loo
Wednesday 26th December 2007 12:36 | Interlude |
| You are an absolutely excellent writer, and this chapter was brilliant! I loved the Propoculars - very clever. Everyone is really in character, a trait that's really important to me. How often do you plan on updating? |
| Friday 4th January 2008 18:36 | Interlude (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the Proproculars...their name and function changed several times in my mind so it's nice to hear someone liked the final product! I plan on updating quite frequently, at least for the next few chapters, which are already written and just need some tweaking. |
