Miri
Wednesday 6th February 2008 19:03 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
A really nicely visualized, and creepy, look at Voldemort. Very expressive.
It seems that Harry can get more than just echoes from what's going on "outside", at least in Ginny's case. It looks like she might part of the key to Harry's 'escape" from his solitary confinement. |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 12:15 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
Thanks!
Ginny is important to Harry, even if he is only just beginning to realise it. |
lantis222
Wednesday 30th January 2008 16:20 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
| Oh wow! This is incredibly intense. I can't wait to find out what happens next. This is very well written. I hope you update soon! |
| Saturday 2nd February 2008 04:50 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
Nice to know we have you hooked, bwah, haa haa haa!
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honourary_weasley
Monday 28th January 2008 13:41 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
| Looking interesting. I'll keep reading, can't wait for more! |
| Saturday 2nd February 2008 04:47 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| More will be coming soon, promise! |
nerd2006
Monday 28th January 2008 12:01 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
| interesting |
| Saturday 2nd February 2008 04:46 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| Thank you! We hope you'll come back for more! |
elvenlaughter
Monday 28th January 2008 11:24 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
| I hate Tom Riddle with a passion, you know that? The psychological aspects of this story are really interesting - the fact that Harry's mind is no longer entirely his own, his connection with some part of the real world, coupled with his general confusion and Tom's manipulation of that. Nicely handled, nicely presented. |
| Saturday 2nd February 2008 04:44 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| Yeah, Tom is a nasty piece of work, isn't he? |
Grandma Kate
Sunday 27th January 2008 14:24 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
Indeed,
what had he made Harry forget? And why?
That's question, isn't it?
I loved this passage-
Her hand was the last thing to lose form, leaving him with a memory of pressure against his fingertips, soft and warm. |
| Saturday 2nd February 2008 04:40 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm quite fond of that bit myself! |
FireFairy
Sunday 27th January 2008 10:30 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
| WOW! you write fast, I am like chewing my nails waiting for the next chapter! I think once you are done with this story you should write others. Another successful chapter! Thanks |
| Sunday 27th January 2008 10:33 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
We've actually written up to chapter 10, and our beta is busily working on them now.
Heather and I are both writing other HP stories individually, but it's been wonderful writing this together and I'm sure we'll do it again once this story is complete. |
Arnel
Saturday 26th January 2008 20:41 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
Oh, nice... a chapter that's all Harry's. How awful to lose the Marauder's Map; I certainly hope the Cloak doesn't go the way the Map did. Harry's going to need it. I really loved it when he made real contact with Ginny and hope they continue to do so because I think she's going to end up being the one to ultimately help him through his coming battle with Voldemort. Speaking of whom is doing some pretty nasty stuff to Harry's brain. Like Harry, I don't like this at all and hope that Harry will eventually master his anger and remember what has happened to him.
Great chapter. I look forward to the next with bated breath. |
| Sunday 27th January 2008 04:59 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| Voldemort is a git, isn't he? |
The_Critic
Saturday 26th January 2008 20:27 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
an update! yay! *cheers*
MORE! MORE! I love seeing whats happening at St.Mungos and how interptering it. MORE! MORE!
awesome story! |
| Sunday 27th January 2008 04:58 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| More is coming soon, we promise! |
majolie
Saturday 26th January 2008 19:20 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
| Excellent chapter. I am SO curious. Poor Harry. I love how Ginny is more solid and reall and colorful to him. |
| Sunday 27th January 2008 04:57 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| I'm glad we're keeping you curious, because hopefully that means you'll keep reading! |
