Miri
Wednesday 6th February 2008 19:26 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
Whoa! I wasn't expecting that twist. Cedric?
It's getting even more puzzling just what is going on. I'm glad Ginny was there and apparently able to reach Harry and loved the fact that Harry could feel the love and warmth of Molly's caring for him.
I could wish your chapters were longer but I understand that you're trying to alterante POVs. Fortunately, it looks like you update frequently. |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 12:17 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| We'll make everything clear eventually, I promise! |
damien
Tuesday 5th February 2008 21:04 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
You're killing me.
Cant you write longer chapters ?!
Good Job so far. keep it up. |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 12:01 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
Really, the RL POV and Harry's POV combined are one whole chapter. We just decided it flowed better as seperate chapters.
Thank you for reviewing! |
honourary_weasley
Tuesday 5th February 2008 15:27 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
Ooh... is it Cedric, I wonder?
I must admit, I'm intrigued as to how and why Harry is in this parallel Hogwarts... and enjoying it a lot! |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 11:59 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| You'll have to wait and see ... |
gwenfrewi72
Monday 4th February 2008 22:37 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
| Interesting story. Can't wait to read more. |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 11:59 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
majolie
Monday 4th February 2008 21:17 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
OH NO - A CLIFFHANGER. I will be on tenterhooks for days!!!
I really liked how you showed Harry feeling Molly's mothering even though he could not feel what she was actually doing.
You really got my adrenaline going when he woke up ... I was literally on the edge of my seat racing through the text to get to what came next.
And then the ending!!!
Oh
My
Gosh
I have no idea what is going on but I am loving it.
I can't wait to see what he makes of this latest development. Now he will know that Ginny is not dead. Hopefully that will reassure him that everyone else is alive too and this will give him strength.
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| Sunday 10th February 2008 11:59 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| oh, this is what we like to hear! I love reading a story that makes you desperate to know what's going on, so it's great that you're like this with our little story! |
The_Critic
Monday 4th February 2008 06:00 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
:0 Awesome update! I appluade! wonder who it could be? Cedric?
I luvv your story!!
MORE! |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 11:55 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
Ooooh, that'd be telling!
We're thrilled you like the story, it makes us happy bunnies! |
Arnel
Sunday 3rd February 2008 21:27 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
A grand mal seizure? Not good. Not good at all... and to think Ginny is wittness to it, poor girl. She'll be a basket-case if he has more. I'm also hoping that Harry is hallucinating at the end and that he's not really conjuring up who I think he is.
Anyway, I'm really glad that Harry is aware of his friends, even though he seems not to be able to hear them. It's great, too, that he feels safe and secure when Molly Weasley is with him. He needs that so badly. However, it scares me that as soon as they leave, Voldemort is able to access Harry's consciousness. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Harry will learn to expel him from his mind very soon.
Great chapter. Keep 'em coming. |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 11:55 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
I know, poor Ginny seeing that!
Thank you for reviewing! |
ejh0904
Sunday 3rd February 2008 19:23 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
| Oh goodness! We need the next chapter! |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 11:53 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| You've had it by now, so I hope you enjoyed it! |
lantis222
Sunday 3rd February 2008 14:53 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
| EEK! What's going on? I can't wait to find out what happens next. Great job! |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 11:52 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| Thank you, we appreciate it! |
elvenlaughter
Sunday 3rd February 2008 14:02 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
Ooh, wow. This is so fascinating! I'm wondering if the metallic taste in his mouth was actually him coughing up blood, or just something he was imagining. It sounds like he woke up and had a seizure... that can't have been good for Ginny to see. Yipes. I'm really curious to see exactly what Voldemort is doing in there, and how it relates to Harry's physical body and his interactions with people.
I love the idea that he could feel the warmth and comfort of the bath, and see his friends interacting, and feel glad of it. I wonder, does he still think they're all dead now? If not, he's about to figure it out, with Sirius there with him.
But, again, way too short, dude. :-(
Looking forward to the next chapter... |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 11:52 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| I hope we have you hooked |
Grandma Kate
Sunday 3rd February 2008 13:52 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
You are enmeshing us in your story with Harry's POV.
I loved the description of the sponge bath- a feeling of warmth and protection folded itself around him like a down-filled duvet. He felt safe and secure for the first time since this madness had started. |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 11:52 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| Thank you! We were worried that people would get fed up with the dual POVs, but it seems to be working, so yay! |
nerd2006
Sunday 3rd February 2008 13:47 | Asleep, He Dreamed |
| I hope you post the next chapter soon! You've got me anxious now. |
| Sunday 10th February 2008 11:48 | Asleep, He Dreamed (Author Response) |
| I hope you're not chewing your finger nails! |
