clare
Tuesday 8th December 2009 22:41 | Observations |
| I love the growth of Neville in this chapter, which is really good to see and could have been easily ignored. |
| Tuesday 1st January 2002 05:42 | Observations (Author Response) |
| neville is a really great character |
blue_and_white_witch
Sunday 31st August 2008 09:21 | Observations |
| Oh Neville is a sweetheart. Another great chapter btw. |
| Tuesday 2nd September 2008 06:28 | Observations (Author Response) |
| thank you |
gymnastgal19
Monday 10th March 2008 22:27 | Observations |
aww ww ww!!! Thats soo oo oo cute!!!
im glad that neville finds some happiness... i wonder if harry ever told him how close he came to having harry's fate....
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| Tuesday 11th March 2008 02:01 | Observations (Author Response) |
hmm, way way down the line I'm sure Harry did tell him, but thats an interesting idea |
Worldmaker
Saturday 8th March 2008 13:29 | Observations |
| I love delving into the development of an unlikely hero, and this was particularly well done. |
| Tuesday 11th March 2008 01:59 | Observations (Author Response) |
| thank you |
elvenlaughter
Tuesday 4th March 2008 13:57 | Observations |
| Aww, Hannah and Neville moment! Yay! |
| Tuesday 4th March 2008 14:32 | Observations (Author Response) |
| thank you |
DukeBrymin
Monday 3rd March 2008 05:39 | Observations |
| It's nice to see this story take us into the aftermath. Neville is a great character, and to see the changes he's gone through, with some foreshadowing to the future, is a nice. Ginny needs an adoptive big brother, since Harry CLEARLY is unsuited for that role. |
| Tuesday 4th March 2008 14:31 | Observations (Author Response) |
Ginny needs an adoptive big brother,
I'm sure Ginny would argue that she doesn't need another big brother, but at Hogwarts in DH she needed someone. |
ibelieveintruelove
Sunday 2nd March 2008 11:54 | Observations |
| Cute chapter! I loved the interaction between Neville and Hannah, and all of Neville's reflections on the past year. Keep the updates coming! |
| Sunday 2nd March 2008 12:20 | Observations (Author Response) |
| thank you, I was torn about putting Hannah in there as she kind of breaks from my core characters for this, but I think it worked. |
Lady Chi
Sunday 2nd March 2008 05:17 | Observations |
I really enjoyed this story -- a series of really beautiful moments from the Harry Potter series. It's always fun to see a different perspective on canon. I particularly liked this last "observation", especially this bit:
Neville looked at the galleon, "Makes you proud to have fought, doesn't it?"
"We never really had a choice," she smiled, "it was what we needed to do."
Neville smiled at her, "Hannah, when all this starts to fade away," he looked at the window, "and the sun rises again, and the mess is cleaned up," He looked back at Hannah, "would you like to meet up some time?"
Just sort of summed up the whole feeling of the series for me... and then moved on to the positive side of the aftermath of the war.
I'm looking forward to more! Thank you so much! |
| Sunday 2nd March 2008 12:18 | Observations (Author Response) |
wow to get a review like this is wonderful, thank you, it shows that you have really read the piece.
I really enjoyed this story -- a series of really beautiful moments from the Harry Potter series.
First off, I am really glad you are enjoying the piece.
It's always fun to see a different perspective on canon.
Cheers, I tried to include pov, that I have not worked on before.
Just sort of summed up the whole feeling of the series for me... and then moved on to the positive side of the aftermath of the war.
Despite what was lost and I'm sure thar the fighters were very aware of that, life did slowly start to move on.
I'm looking forward to more!
There's one chapter left which should be up next weekend. |
harry_ginnyfan
Saturday 1st March 2008 17:03 | Observations |
Good chapter. Keep on writing!
Cheers! |
| Sunday 2nd March 2008 04:04 | Observations (Author Response) |
| thank you |
juliet
Saturday 1st March 2008 15:00 | Observations |
| This was a beautiful chapter, and such a lovely insight into the differences between Harry and Neville. It gives me such a feeling of calm and hope. Thanks kathryn |
| Sunday 2nd March 2008 04:03 | Observations (Author Response) |
| I'm really glad you liked it. |
GryffindorGal87
Saturday 1st March 2008 14:49 | Observations |
| that was an amazing chapter! and the N/H bit at the end was just perfect. I can't wait for the next one. |
| Sunday 2nd March 2008 04:02 | Observations (Author Response) |
| thank you, the next one will be the last one. |
brown_eyes
Saturday 1st March 2008 06:53 | Observations |
Another great chapter, I really love this story. |
| Saturday 1st March 2008 13:37 | Observations (Author Response) |
| thank you |
Trelawney2213
Saturday 1st March 2008 06:07 | Observations |
When he had been asked to lead, to rebel against authority and to stand up for what he believed in, he had not been found wanting. Neville has never truly been found wanting. He's just, to put in in herbology terms he can relate to, 'a late bloomer'. Nicely done. |
| Saturday 1st March 2008 13:35 | Observations (Author Response) |
cheers mate, ad I agree I think late bloomer is a very good phrase to use with Neville |
Grandma Kate
Friday 29th February 2008 22:08 | Observations |
What a sweet segment between Neville and Hannah. I got a kick out of
Hannah smiled back at him, and he found himself smiling the way that he had seen Harry do so many times last year. "That sounds good."
Oh Neville, you dashing lad! |
| Saturday 1st March 2008 13:30 | Observations (Author Response) |
| Oh Neville is a keeper |
dcgirl
Friday 29th February 2008 20:37 | Observations |
| Good chapter! I liked the characterization. |
| Saturday 1st March 2008 13:29 | Observations (Author Response) |
| thank you |
