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Monday 21st July 2008 20:05 | Socks | I've never read this before - trying to decide whether to read the 2nd version after I liked this one so much, or move straight to Shoes...
Curiosity is winning out... | VegHindu101
Tuesday 27th May 2008 08:05 | Socks | | Oh hahaha, I like this. I like that it's just dialogue and my imagination creating the scene for me. She's about to educate him on his "scent." Haha, my poor smaller -than-a-teaspoon emotional range Harry. | Grandma Kate
Monday 26th May 2008 10:44 | Socks | Wow! I am impressed with your story, all in dialogue.
I think I agree that it is more entertaining for the reader to fill in the blanks. | Patches
Monday 26th May 2008 02:47 | Socks | | I like this version of your story but I will have to admit that I like Version 2 better. Thank you for writing and postin both together. I look forward to "Shoes". p |
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