nire135 Thursday 12th March 2009 12:46 | A Friendly Warning |
lol. i love it. |
gymnastgal19 Friday 22nd August 2008 12:13 | A Friendly Warning |
hehe nice
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Snowflake24 Monday 23rd June 2008 10:41 | A Friendly Warning |
Lol! This made me laugh. I loved Ron barging in...to save Harry. I think Hermione and Ginny are going to have Ron and Harry wrapped round their little fingers |
Ginny WcPr Friday 20th June 2008 18:26 | A Friendly Warning |
This is really good, comical, and REALLY REALLY GOOD
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DukeBrymin Monday 9th June 2008 15:55 | A Friendly Warning |
Very enjoyable--nice humor, and great reunion between our favorite couple. |
gryffindorgal87 Monday 9th June 2008 13:22 | A Friendly Warning |
"If I get like that, please, slap the hell out of me." Brilliant line! I loved Ron's part! |
Sunday 15th June 2008 08:57 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Thanks, I love tha line! |
Patches Monday 9th June 2008 01:46 | A Friendly Warning |
This is priceless! What a great image to have of Ron's feelings for Hermione taking over his thoughts and trying to warn Harry about what could happen to him with Ginny. Very short but very impressive message in so few words. Thanks for writing. p |
PhoenixFeathers Saturday 7th June 2008 19:36 | A Friendly Warning |
Nice.... dind of the same thing that happened last time, but i like it... once again, nice
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aharkins Saturday 7th June 2008 14:00 | A Friendly Warning |
I love it! |
Saturday 14th June 2008 21:15 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Thanks! |
The_Critic Saturday 7th June 2008 12:42 | A Friendly Warning |
"I'm here to save you, mate. It's obvious by the way you look at her and touch her that you're in love and Ginny knows that. She'll wrap you around her little finger and control you." He hesitated a moment and then continued, "And, and . . . you'll love it. I mean, you'll really love it, mate. But then you'll stop playing Quidditch and doing other fun stuff and all you'll want to do is be with her and do girly things . . . ." lol. And then its "Ron, stop bothering them. I thought we were going to walk into the village this morning and do some shopping." Ron seemed to melt with her touch, got a silly grin on his face and disappeared from the doorway. lol... Nice Story. 9/10
Critic |
Saturday 14th June 2008 21:14 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. |
mischiefmanaged Friday 6th June 2008 13:24 | A Friendly Warning |
awwww!
that was soooo sweet!
really lovely! |
Friday 6th June 2008 18:18 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. |
Zeta_one Friday 6th June 2008 11:11 | A Friendly Warning |
Enjoyed the story. Ron is right, Harry will love it! |
Friday 6th June 2008 18:19 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Yeah, love does make a person silly and they wouldn't change a thing . . . I'm glad you liked it. |
RIPHedwig Friday 6th June 2008 08:40 | A Friendly Warning |
Wow that was so cute! Short and sweet!
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Friday 6th June 2008 18:21 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
I'm really glad you liked it. |
RIPHedwig Friday 6th June 2008 08:40 | A Friendly Warning |
Wow that was so cute! Short and sweet!
B |
brios Friday 6th June 2008 07:57 | A Friendly Warning |
Lol, that was funny to read, thanks for writing it, it made my day a cheerful one. |
Friday 6th June 2008 18:22 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Thanks! That makes my day. |
barbara Friday 6th June 2008 07:22 | A Friendly Warning |
Yummy, delicious, scrumptious. |
Friday 6th June 2008 18:23 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Thanks, I really appreciate that. |
ngayonatkailanman Friday 6th June 2008 03:37 | A Friendly Warning |
Delightful |
Friday 6th June 2008 18:26 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. |
Grandma Kate Friday 6th June 2008 02:29 | A Friendly Warning |
This is a gem. Ron's warning is the 'voice of experience'-
It's obvious by the way you look at her and touch her that you're in love and Ginny knows that. She'll wrap you around her little finger and control you." He hesitated a moment and then continued, "And, and . . . you'll love it. I mean, you'll really love it, mate. |
Friday 6th June 2008 18:31 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Everyone knows that deep down Ron is noting more than a big teddy bear -- especially when it comes to Hermione. + |
Arnel Friday 6th June 2008 01:27 | A Friendly Warning |
Oh, this is cute! The thought that Ron sought to warn Harry of the dangers awaiting him lest he fall under Ginny's spell is just priceless. Harry's response to Ginny made me howl with laughter. Great little story that gets . |
Friday 6th June 2008 18:34 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Thank you so much. Okay, I'll have to admit (a little embarrasing since it's my own story) that I laughed my head off when I came up with Harry's comment. Thanks again. + |