kash2210
Tuesday 23rd September 2008 10:38 | Rebuilding Life |
A good start to what promising story, I just love to read these types of post DH stories to see how people try and fill in the 19 years.
Nice touch by Bill in what he said to Harry by calling him 'Little Brother'! |
Emeralds and Rubies
Monday 18th August 2008 10:26 | Rebuilding Life |
| ! Wonderful! You almost had me in tears...first of grief, then of laughter! |
| Monday 18th August 2008 17:58 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| I aim to please |
majolie
Saturday 19th July 2008 20:34 | Rebuilding Life |
| Just found your story. It's great so far. I really like your take on the immediate aftermath. I'm glad to see the next chapter is already posted, and hope for more soon! |
SeaNymph
Monday 23rd June 2008 19:27 | Rebuilding Life |
This was a great story! Awkward at times, but hey, I think that's what makes it so nice...this way, your readers will be able to see you grow as a writer.
I especially like all the talk of Ginny's boyfriend getting what's coming to him! It cracked me up like no tomorrow! And your Bill is almost exactly how I would have pictured him, ready to take on it all to help his family. Great job! I can't wait to find out who the mystery visitor is. |
| Monday 23rd June 2008 20:06 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| I'll say it now so you all know - I definitely get better as a writer as this thing goes on. Definitely. I had a lot of fun with Bill actually. We get more Bill later. Glad you enjoyed! |
Trismegistus
Saturday 21st June 2008 00:51 | Rebuilding Life |
| This is a wonderful start. It's a good mix of the melancholy appropriate to the situation with the humor so long associated both with Ms. Rowling's descriptions of the world and with life in general. I do look forward to your following through on it. |
| Saturday 21st June 2008 07:42 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| Thank you. Follow through is all go |
Sueatducksfoot
Friday 20th June 2008 21:54 | Rebuilding Life |
| Woot!! Wonderful Kezza. I can't wait to read the rest. |
| Saturday 21st June 2008 07:42 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| YAY! |
Melindaleo
Friday 20th June 2008 07:36 | Rebuilding Life |
| Woot! Oh, I'm so happy to see you here, Kezza! I love how deliciously angsty this story is. Welcome to PS! |
| Friday 20th June 2008 18:31 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| I had forgotten how angsty it was!!! It is isn't it? |
saulick
Friday 20th June 2008 06:54 | Rebuilding Life |
| This is an interesting beginning. I look forward to seeing where you go with it. |
| Friday 20th June 2008 06:59 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| It's good to have you along for the ride! Hope you enjoy. |
Patches
Friday 20th June 2008 06:16 | Rebuilding Life |
| I really like this beginning. Of course the "brothers" all want to protect their sister. This is normal for them but Harry is probably the one that they would accept after some good natured ribbing first. The fire whiskey didn't help them to be more observant though. They couldn't even figure out Ron's mirth. He knows Harry loves Ginny. I look forward to where you are going with this story. p |
| Friday 20th June 2008 06:58 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| Hopefully you will enjoy the journey. Will they accept him indeed? |
tragic
Thursday 19th June 2008 21:31 | Rebuilding Life |
| ahhhhhhhhh cliffy right off the bat. I hate cliffy's lol. Good read though and I agree your george is perfect as are the rest of the weasley's. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Friday 20th June 2008 06:56 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| Oh it's only a little cliff. you should see the cliff at the end of chapter - Oh. I've said too much ... |
Grandma Kate
Thursday 19th June 2008 20:30 | Rebuilding Life |
| A wonderful start. Your George seems very true to cannon. |
| Friday 20th June 2008 06:32 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| Thank you |
Grandma Kate
Thursday 19th June 2008 20:30 | Rebuilding Life |
| A wonderful start. Your George seems very true to cannon. |
