gymnastgal19 Tuesday 8th July 2008 18:51 | 1:The Best Kiss |
nice story! |
brown_eyes Saturday 5th July 2008 06:02 | 1:The Best Kiss |
Cute story.
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brown_eyes Saturday 5th July 2008 06:02 | 1:The Best Kiss |
Cute story.
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brown_eyes Saturday 5th July 2008 06:01 | 1:The Best Kiss |
Cute story.
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hpandgwfan1 Friday 4th July 2008 16:18 | 1:The Best Kiss |
really cool |
Astrid Friday 4th July 2008 09:30 | 1:The Best Kiss |
Aww, I love protective!Harry at the end. Good work! |
RIPHedwig Wednesday 2nd July 2008 05:05 | 1:The Best Kiss |
Really cute!!
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Is this a series? Are there more? I love H/G post-Epilogue!
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Wednesday 2nd July 2008 10:48 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
Thank You! I wos planning on having this as a one-shot, but 4 sum reason it's shown as 1:The Best Kiss, so I mite write a multi-chaptered story that will carry on from it, I understand that the title was a bit decieving! |
xDancesWithRainx Sunday 29th June 2008 09:25 | 1:The Best Kiss |
Haha.
Cute |
Monday 30th June 2008 09:01 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
A little bit of cuteness does a lot lol, thank you. |
GryffindorGal87 Friday 27th June 2008 14:45 | 1:The Best Kiss |
awww! I loved it. Great job! |
Monday 30th June 2008 09:00 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
Thank you very much. |
The_Critic Wednesday 25th June 2008 18:51 | 1:The Best Kiss |
"Miss Weasley, what were you doing with the Sword of Gryffindor?" Were you going to take it to Harry Potter?" ""Yep, in a nutshell." "Are you aware that Mr Potter is Undesirable Number 1?" "Not to me."
lol! |
Monday 30th June 2008 08:59 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
Thank you |
The_Critic Wednesday 25th June 2008 18:50 | 1:The Best Kiss |
"Miss Weasley, what were you doing with the Sword of Gryffindor?" Were you going to take it to Harry Potter?" "Are you aware that Mr Potter is Undesirable Number 1?"
lol! |
TangoCharlie Wednesday 25th June 2008 08:35 | 1:The Best Kiss |
I think what I liked most about this story (and I loved it all) was how it had me imagining Ginny as a mother sharing a very special bond with her daughter, the two being so close they can share everything with each other and freely and unabashedly ask questions other daughters might not even dream of asking their mothers! Such a wonderful family dynamic! |
Wednesday 25th June 2008 13:09 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
I love it when mothers and daughters get along. I get along really well with my mother so that helped a lot. Thank You very much |
Neli P Tuesday 24th June 2008 20:42 | 1:The Best Kiss |
The idea of Lily "having an eye on a Ravenclaw" was absolutely brilliant Good job |
Wednesday 25th June 2008 13:05 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
Cheers, like I said it must run family! |
ngayonatkailanman Monday 23rd June 2008 17:16 | 1:The Best Kiss |
How very sweet. Most enjoyable. |
Tuesday 24th June 2008 11:16 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
Cheers! |
swannygirl Monday 23rd June 2008 17:10 | 1:The Best Kiss |
This was a wonderful sorry! I really liked the interaction between and at the end. I can can believe that would be very protective of his little girl! Hope you continue to write!
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Tuesday 24th June 2008 11:15 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
Thank You, Harry's always been protective so it seemed so natural to have him as the overprotective father. I will continue writing, I have plans..... |
Dad Monday 23rd June 2008 15:11 | 1:The Best Kiss |
I have seen this story line so many times before, but this was so well written I thought it was great. |
Tuesday 24th June 2008 11:13 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
Thank you very much! |
Grandma Kate Monday 23rd June 2008 08:57 | 1:The Best Kiss |
This story provides a look at Ginny in two different stages of her life. You've captured her spirit well. |
Monday 23rd June 2008 09:43 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
I was most worried about not getting Ginny right so that means a lot to me, thank you |
mischiefmanaged Monday 23rd June 2008 04:37 | 1:The Best Kiss |
I love the story!!
Ron DEFINATELY deserves that title!!
Looking forward to reading more! |
Monday 23rd June 2008 09:42 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
I know many people who could have Ron's title, cheers |
sweetdreamer285 Sunday 22nd June 2008 20:49 | 1:The Best Kiss |
Harry went out w/ one, too. He would know ^_^
Very sweet story.
And Ron so deserves the title. ~_~! |
Monday 23rd June 2008 09:39 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
I suppose he would, must run in the family
Thank You |
brios Sunday 22nd June 2008 16:48 | 1:The Best Kiss |
Funny and entertaining and sweet. Lovely in a nutshell. Any possibilities of it been a little bit longer? *puppy eyes* |
Monday 23rd June 2008 09:37 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
Thank You. I never know how long to make a piece of writing, but I'll give the puppy eyes what they want next time |
Trelawney2213 Sunday 22nd June 2008 16:13 | 1:The Best Kiss |
I spotted Rose and Scorpius kissing yesterday — oh god! Don't tell Uncle Ron. Although personally, what's wrong with being with a Ravenclaw? I like that this suggests that Harry and Ginny haven't instilled a dislike for Draco's offspring into their own children just because of their own difficulties with Draco. Well done piece with very realistic interaction between Ginny and Lils. Can't wait to see some more from you. |
Monday 23rd June 2008 09:34 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
Cheers! Couldn't have done it without the help of my amazing Beta |
Patches Sunday 22nd June 2008 15:37 | 1:The Best Kiss |
This is a cute start to a story. Of course Harry and Ginny had problems. They had 3 children and they have people still living that they have bad memories about. Draco Malfoy being one of the biggest! Having their neice involved with his son is not a happy prospect but they will work it out somehow. I like the way you put this story together so far. I look forward to more. thanks for writing. p |
Monday 23rd June 2008 09:17 | 1:The Best Kiss (Author Response) |
Thank you very much, I will try not to disappoint in the future lol |