blue artemis
Tuesday 8th July 2008 15:53 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| This is quite interesting. I can't wait to see where you take it. |
roonil
Sunday 6th July 2008 20:14 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
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DeborahSu
Sunday 6th July 2008 11:33 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| I just discovered this story--it looks like it could shape up into one of the GOOD ones, so do keep plugging away, please? I look forward to the next chapter! |
Glrasshopper
Sunday 6th July 2008 03:43 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
This is different. Will be interesting to see where it goes. It definitely makes a change from all those stories about how a victorious Harry is a sucker for punishment by trying to do things a second time.
Looking forward to the next chap. |
LaurenDC
Sunday 29th June 2008 22:26 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| I do hope you continue with this story, it's really interesting! I think the prophecy was really though out and had great word usage and I can't wait to see what you have planned! Keep up the great work! |
| Monday 30th June 2008 21:19 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake (Author Response) |
I truly have to thank the people who have worked as beta for me, without their help no part of this story would make sense, and that prophecy would be nothing but a plot bunny waiting to be shot and cooked for dinner.
& 4-ever |
PPL
Friday 27th June 2008 02:20 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
Nice start.
Looks promising.
Looking forward to updates. |
Patches
Thursday 26th June 2008 23:09 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| Wow! This is quite a story and a real delimma. I look forward to how your work this out. Thank you for writing. p |
jakjakattk
Thursday 26th June 2008 17:10 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
Good. I look forward to the next chapter
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charon
Thursday 26th June 2008 16:31 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
Yowza! What a great story so far! I've never read another story with a similar setup. I'm really looking forward to watching your characters deal with the fall-out from the prophecy. By the way, will we find out who gave the prophecy, and to whom? "Petunia Evans Dursley to Dedalus Diggle and his brother Ted?" I'm going mad!
I can't wait for the continuation. |
| Thursday 26th June 2008 18:32 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake (Author Response) |
Petunia Evans Dursley
DDD= Dudley Daniel Dursley
TED= Theodore Edward Dursley (Vernon's second cousin created just for this story)
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Rocky235
Thursday 26th June 2008 11:42 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
Yikes!
This is pretty exciting. I like H/G stories and your Hermione character is good too.
Best of all is your writing. No typos, good grammar, and easy to read dialog make for happy readers, like me. |
squidtamer
Wednesday 25th June 2008 23:50 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
Well I must say I was pleasantly surprised after reading the prologue and this chapter. But I must say I was a touch dissapointed that you never touched on _why_ the second prophecy went unnoticed. Yet you appear to base the title off of this very fact.
I'm curious to see where you take this in future installments. |
hpnopart
Wednesday 25th June 2008 22:42 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| This is interesting and different. Please do update fast. |
Ellery
Wednesday 25th June 2008 19:07 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
Ooh! I really enjoyed that!
Keep up the good work! |
The_Critic
Wednesday 25th June 2008 18:08 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| No one ever feels bad for poor Dean. |
| Thursday 26th June 2008 18:44 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake (Author Response) |
he is certianly not one of my favorite characters.
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lantis222
Wednesday 25th June 2008 17:08 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| very interesting, I can't wait to find out where this goes. Great job! |
Comet Moon
Wednesday 25th June 2008 16:41 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
YEAH
Your up again
Glad to see you back, have been looking forward to this story
Good work
Ja ne
Jim |
