TangoCharlie
Tuesday 30th September 2008 00:58 | Unbreakable Bonds |
Whew! I'm gald Ron's okay... had me worried for a bit there. It would have been good to find out exactly how the mgaic had been used to rescue Ron, not just find him.
Your study in relationships continues, and I'm really enjoying it. Ginny in particular is quite fascinating. I'm not sure if I like how yet; she's a hard one to guage (I'm definately leaning more towards liking her though, I think i can empathise with her mixed emotions.
Some beautiful imagery again. I'm very much enjoying your work : ) |
dougalpotter
Sunday 20th July 2008 07:15 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| Another well written chapter. |
jere
Friday 4th July 2008 22:21 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| hey! its been a very interesting story so far. like the twist about the Teacher. i just have one question, in the first chapter you mentioned how the story was completed as of june 2008. what do mean by that? |
| Tuesday 8th July 2008 17:47 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
I hope you stay interested! In my biased opinion, the story just gets better the further you get into it.
I finished writing the story in June, 2007 and the editing process took nearly a year (long story). Now it's going through my beta to be posted here! |
shin
Friday 4th July 2008 00:44 | Unbreakable Bonds |
I love the new take in this fic. Thank you for sharing your point of view.
Now please I want to see more, do you have a ETA on the next one? |
| Tuesday 8th July 2008 17:43 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like it. There's a lot more to come. Hopefully the next chapter will be up in a couple of days! |
DukeBrymin
Tuesday 1st July 2008 19:52 | Unbreakable Bonds |
Ooh, tantalizing foretaste of the H/G fluffiness that can be! I liked the letter to Hermione, but I think Ginny must have not read all of it, to get so mad at Hermione for Harry LOVING her--she must not have been able to see the "like a sister" theme of the letter.
The description of the feel of Ginny's mind in Harry's was beautiful, and I'm greatly anticipating more of that type of fluffy goodness. |
| Tuesday 8th July 2008 17:42 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your kind words. As for what happened, sometimes your own feelings can blind you to reality, i.e. Ginny not seeing that lettor for what it really was. There's a lot of explanation to come so stay tuned! |
LaurenDC
Sunday 29th June 2008 15:57 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| Ok, that last part was some much needed HG fluff! I mean Hermione, no offense, but ugh! She felt brotherly towards him since they met and yet she still flirts and wonders how it would be to kiss him. I have 6 brothers and I do not ever have a similar thought. Plus, knowing how Ginny feels about him makes it just mean. Anyway, good chapter, I still can't wait until I'm less confused about the first part though. Keep up the good work! |
| Sunday 29th June 2008 18:40 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| I'm sorry that any of it is confusing, I didn't mean for it to be so. Please just hang in there, we've got 11 more chapters to go! |
Patches
Sunday 29th June 2008 15:37 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| This is a good story. I like the slow beginning. It kept me on edge to see where you were going with the story. Don't worry about it being AU. some of the best fanfiction I've read is AU and I enjoy it as much as cannon. It makes HP so much more than it is just in cannon. I'm so glad Ginny is beginning to be so important to Harry. I hope it doesn't take him too long to acknowledge it. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
| Sunday 29th June 2008 18:39 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| Funnily enough, this is only AU because it took me so long to write: started over three years ago. Remember, nothing from HBP or DH is in this story! Look for more development of relationships as we go, of course, that's a general statement for any story so I don't have to give anything away. Thanks for reviewing! |
teritcf
Saturday 28th June 2008 09:21 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| Interesting chapter. I think the mind reading is a good plot twist and you really create a warm atmosphere in your settings. Although, I'm still really struggling with your Hermione/Harry. That letter! It is just so out of character for him and his thoughts are all over. One minute Hermione is beautiful and he wants to snog her then he is describing her in sisterly terms??? Which is it? His feelings/thoughts toward Ginny are not nearly as well written and seem like you really want him with Hermione but . . Ginny is just coming off as jealous and Hermione is feeding that by showing her that letter and completely shoving in Ginny's face her closeness with Harry. I just don't see Hermione ever doing that and her "tears" over Ginny's anguish seem unrealistic in light of her actions. Anyway, I am enjoying your story and the plot line I'm just having difficulty with your characterization of Harry and Hermione. The end section with Ginny was cute, but it seems as if you really prefer Hermione and that is coming through in the story. |
| Sunday 29th June 2008 18:36 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the comment about setting up the scenes, I appreciate it because I work hard to make it feel like you're present, sitting next to the characters. As for the relationships, I won't give anything away, so please don't be angry if i just say: keep reading! |
LeprechaunJV
Saturday 28th June 2008 02:22 | Unbreakable Bonds |
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| Sunday 29th June 2008 18:34 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
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Grandma Kate
Friday 27th June 2008 23:42 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| The scenes with Harry and Ginny at the end were especially moving. Harry has so much love for his friends. |
| Sunday 29th June 2008 18:33 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| Yes, the relationship between Harry and Ginny allows for a lot of good storytelling. This was one of those instances where Harry sort of wrote the story for me! |
saulick
Friday 27th June 2008 15:12 | Unbreakable Bonds |
| A very good story. I hope you update soon. |
| Sunday 29th June 2008 18:30 | Unbreakable Bonds (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the comment. I can't make any promises, but look for updates about once a week. |
