kash2210
Wednesday 24th September 2008 14:40 | Je Suis En Vie |
I've read some of the other reveiws thanking you not allowing Moly & George to mecoe to emotional, then your answer at the beginning, I totally agree with your point of view. A mother losing a child must be the worst pain ever! (I speak as a father!)! And for a twin to lose it's sibling must be devasting, almost like losing part of you!
Quite a sad chapter, surprised with Ginny though, I know that she's feeling sad but, I thought she'd be more upset with Harry! (Maybe she will be later!!!)
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Prongs739
Thursday 21st August 2008 10:14 | Je Suis En Vie |
-Sob!- That was very heart felt, and very sad.
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PhoenixFeathers
Tuesday 19th August 2008 13:03 | Je Suis En Vie |
ok, just wondering... why aren't the titles in English?
( Just a suggestion, but you could put the translation in parenthacies ) |
patch
Thursday 24th July 2008 22:14 | Je Suis En Vie |
| A very powerful, descriptive, and yet still concise story. I hope you can keep this up and I look forward to reading more. |
majolie
Thursday 17th July 2008 18:44 | Je Suis En Vie |
| Very nice installment - lots of well-thought out detail. |
weaselsu
Thursday 17th July 2008 12:29 | Je Suis En Vie |
| I really liked it! The flag, the Weasley's laughing at Harry and Hermione talking to reporters were all great ideas. Good job.....longer chapters please! |
jakjakattk
Wednesday 16th July 2008 17:59 | Je Suis En Vie |
| very nice but also sad. |
jakjakattk
Wednesday 16th July 2008 17:58 | Je Suis En Vie |
| very nice but also sad. |
Patches
Wednesday 16th July 2008 13:58 | Je Suis En Vie |
| What a painful experience with people grieving all around tham and trying to find light moments. Then feeling guilty for those feelings. The human grieving process is always a difficult rollercoaster. They will get through this but it will take time. thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
toskin
Tuesday 15th July 2008 21:59 | Je Suis En Vie |
| I like that you didn't make the Weasleys an inconsolable mess, especially Molly and George. I also like that you mentioned Percy being the last to see Fred alive and so shortly after reconciling with his family. One thing I haven't really read done well in a story yet concerns Harry and possessions. It's a small thing, but he left Privet Drive with just a rucksack, then lost the Firebolt and Hedwig in the escape from Death Eaters. He had nothing after being caught by the snatchers and taken to Malfoy Manor (no clothes, etc). I'm assuming that he conjured clothes or Bill transformed some or something, but at some point, I'd think he'd want to get the basic stuff needed to live. So it seems fitting that he left Hogwarts with nothing except his family. Sorry, I know I'm rambling. Did you have any plans to address any of that. Oh, and please don't make Molly or George turn into messes that are incapableof functioning. I find it hard to believe that either one would allow themselves to get so depressed that they can't function. I think they know that Fred wouldn't have like for them to be like that. |
| Wednesday 16th July 2008 07:47 | Je Suis En Vie (Author Response) |
Hi!
First of all, thanks for reviewing!
About Molly and George - I know they haven't been very weepy, but next chapter is going to be pretty hard on everyone because of the funerals, and they will cry and be a mess...not for too long though. Don't forget they're grieving, and that's not something that goes away quickly. But rest assured that they will function...
Also, I haven't really thought about Harry's belongings although you did give me a cookie to think about and include in future chapters, after things will calm down a bit. |
