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gymnastgal19
Sunday 10th August 2008 11:07 | Courage | nice story
im glad that percy decided to make amends with his family... even though it was too late for fred... | | Wednesday 13th August 2008 18:45 | Courage (Author Response) | | Better late than never! I'm sure Fred would have been glad that Percy finally fessed up to being wrong...after some pranks, of course. | aharkins
Wednesday 6th August 2008 11:48 | Courage | Sappy can be a good thing - especially in a children's bedtime story. Shehu Rites may be a bit obvious but I think a lot of JKRs names are also a bit obvious. Remus Lupin for example.
I liked your story. I hope to see more of your work in the future. Thank you for sharing.
| | Saturday 9th August 2008 13:00 | Courage (Author Response) | | lol. I thought it was a little too sappy at first, then I had to go through it a couple of times, and I sort of got the feel for it. I'm really glad you liked the story, and thank you so much for reviewing! | Dad
Tuesday 5th August 2008 10:32 | Courage | | Not Shakespeare, but a good read. | | Saturday 9th August 2008 13:02 | Courage (Author Response) | Hmm..I don't know what to say to that. But I'm glad you liked reading it. I know that I could never compare to the wonderful works of Shakespeare and other great literary artists. They're just too good!
Thanks for the review! |
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