Sheepie_101
Saturday 3rd January 2009 04:00 | Reunion |
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm not quite sure
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gymnastgal19
Monday 6th October 2008 07:56 | Reunion |
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ngayonatkailanman
Monday 25th August 2008 14:26 | Reunion |
| Absolutely marvelous |
the_critic
Friday 15th August 2008 10:54 | Reunion |
| H/G Fluff. Ah, missing moments... |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 9th August 2008 20:21 | Reunion |
nice story
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| Saturday 9th August 2008 20:28 | Reunion (Author Response) |
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Dan |
Arnel
Friday 8th August 2008 15:17 | Reunion |
This is a nice little reunion story. I like it because Harry and Ginny haven't declared their love for each other, there's the potential for more hurt feelings to come out and they're both being considerate of the other Weasleys.
The only thing I disagree with is the fact that the second half of the Hogwarts battle didn't start in the Great Hall, it started with Hagrid carrying Harry across the lawn to the front doors of the castle. Go back into DH and find that scene.
All in all, I enjoyed the story. |
| Saturday 9th August 2008 20:28 | Reunion (Author Response) |
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
You're right, of course. We were both remiss in that fact, if I were to go back, I'd definitely fix that error. Thanks for bringing it to my attention
~Dan |
DukeBrymin
Friday 8th August 2008 14:28 | Reunion |
| Nice interlude--feels a little strange, for some reason. Maybe it needs a little more depth, more study of the emotions involved. Anyway, I enjoyed it nevertheless--good writing. |
| Saturday 9th August 2008 20:25 | Reunion (Author Response) |
Yeah, both of those things would probably improve this, but we wrote this one night after 2 AM, and we were pretty happy with how it turned out considering the time and the method of writing it paragraph-by-paragraph.
Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
~Dan |
RIPHedwig
Wednesday 6th August 2008 15:22 | Reunion |
(Sigh).
Lovely! Sad, but happy, too. Well written, I liked the idea of the paragraph at a time thing, but that remained quite contained - I imagine if I did that with a friend it would wildly spiral out of control, with each trying to out-do the other!
B |
| Saturday 9th August 2008 20:23 | Reunion (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. It definitely was a new experience for me, but I'm pleased how it turned out |
