hermione&ginny
Sunday 21st August 2011 19:37 | Master of Life |
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harry_ginnyfan
Sunday 2nd November 2008 18:05 | Master of Life |
another great chapter, carry onward!
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TangoCharlie
Sunday 28th September 2008 22:28 | Master of Life |
Another great chapter.
It might have been good to see a bt more of the action right at the beginning of the chapter, because it felt like it was over too quickly. Even though they say they don't know who it was that attacked them, it's not very clear if they just don't know the people, or whether they didn't hang around to find out. I felt like there wasn't quite enough explanation of what happened there.
Normall I'm not a fan of the whole 'Harry and Ginny getting married at the earliest possible convenience' thing, but what I like about what you've done here is show a lot of potential for problems to arise out of this haste, so I look forward to seeing what comes of that.
The proposal scene and then the exchange between Harry and Mr Weasley were both really nice moments, and not overdone. |
kash2210
Tuesday 23rd September 2008 14:32 | Master of Life |
| Another good chapter, loved the impromtu marriage proposal, had me grinning with a hint a tear. |
ngayonatkailanman
Friday 12th September 2008 15:08 | Master of Life |
Merlin help us when the mother chooses the bride's wedding dress!
Crackshot should be shot! What a pillock!
Excellent. |
Prongs739
Thursday 21st August 2008 16:13 | Master of Life |
OO! wonder wat it looks like?
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jakjakattk
Wednesday 20th August 2008 23:26 | Master of Life |
Very nice but a bit much of the girly for one single chapter. the guys need a bit more adventure to liven up and chapter. throw us a bone, maybe some prank on all of the reporters, or have Fred and Gorge take the mickey out of Ron for wanting to get married. I almost had a the hope that Mr. Weasley would fun with Harry a bit over asking for Ginny's hand in marriage.
Keep up the hard work and don;t be discouraged by my one sided review, |
| Friday 22nd August 2008 11:04 | Master of Life (Author Response) |
| Not discouraged at all. I've written through to chapter eight already and there's some good solid action in chapter five. There'll be more in future chapters, but there's also some fluff in the middle. Thanks for the review. |
crazyredhead
Tuesday 19th August 2008 09:27 | Master of Life |
| please update soon i like it alot. i hope that the new minster gets the boot |
The Boss
Monday 18th August 2008 04:08 | Master of Life |
Yay for Harry and Ginny! Come on Ron, better hurry up. I am getting addicted to this story - which isnt a bad thing at all
One question, in the following chapters do we find out how the photograph was taken of Harry and Ginny kissing inside The Burrow's protection? Keep the chapters coming!
The Boss |
| Monday 18th August 2008 07:01 | Master of Life (Author Response) |
| We don't find out how, but as many Muggle celebrities know, telephoto lenses allow for remote snapping of private pictures, even when you think you are alone. |
