DaniKay
Tuesday 5th May 2009 18:00 | That Terrifying Momentum |
“Another brilliant deduction by Sherlock Holmione.”
lmao niice.
And Scott comes up with some pretty good ideas when he wants to lol.
Amazing chapter!!!
DaniKay
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| Wednesday 6th May 2009 21:04 | That Terrifying Momentum (Author Response) |
| Scott does have his moments. |
AriesGirl
Sunday 7th December 2008 16:50 | That Terrifying Momentum |
Caleb,
This was a very interesting, fun chapter for you. Hope you had alot of fun trying to figure out why it kept getting rejected, before they accepted it. LOL!
I missed you sweethart! |
| Sunday 7th December 2008 21:36 | That Terrifying Momentum (Author Response) |
Ah, but this chapter never was rejected because I didn't give them the chance to reject it. I learned my lesson in the course of reading and rereading the story requirements and trying to figure out what I needed to do before submitting the first chapter. So I was totally on top of it. If only I was totally on top of you.
I missed you too. |
aharkins
Sunday 30th November 2008 09:21 | That Terrifying Momentum |
Love the story, love Scott and really love the authors notes. Any day when I find an update from you is a good day. Thanks for writing and for sharing your talent.
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| Wednesday 3rd December 2008 00:21 | That Terrifying Momentum (Author Response) |
| And thanks for reviewing my humble offering. With any luck, the next chapter will also catch your fancy. |
Patches
Friday 28th November 2008 05:11 | That Terrifying Momentum |
| Poor Harry. Everyone who cares about him and Ginny are trying to move things along. Harry, however, has morals that do not include asking out a girl with an existing boyfriend. And "No Scott! You can't kill Dean!"At least Harry finally got a date with a "friend" and Luna is an excellent choice. I look forward to the party. Thanks for writing. p |
| Wednesday 3rd December 2008 00:20 | That Terrifying Momentum (Author Response) |
Harry, however, has morals that do not include asking out a girl with an existing boyfriend.
So would it be better to abandon his morals and get what he and everyone else seems to want, or would the act simply do more damage down the road?
And "No Scott! You can't kill Dean!"
He could if he wanted to. But he won't. His mission is to preserve life as a majority, and killing random bystanders does nothing to further that goal.
At least Harry finally got a date with a "friend" and Luna is an excellent choice. I look forward to the party.
I wonder if you'll enjoy the POV that the party takes place in. We'll see.
Thanks for writing.
Thanks for reading, and, of course, reviewing. |
Chatmandu
Thursday 27th November 2008 13:37 | That Terrifying Momentum |
| ! I knew I forgot something. Regarding that glitch for reposting chapter 11... Blame Eva! None of the readers would know and she wouldn't give a . |
| Wednesday 3rd December 2008 00:17 | That Terrifying Momentum (Author Response) |
| Ah, but it was entirely my fault. It wouldn't be polite to blame Eva. |
Chatmandu
Thursday 27th November 2008 13:34 | That Terrifying Momentum |
Well Scott was in rare form this chapter, even in the abridged version. Is Hermione EVER going to figure out he is (mostly) jerking her chain?
I was never a chemist so I had to open another web window to look up the various meds Scott mentioned. Pity Hermione didn't press that issue further, her reaction would have been really funny. And Harry's probably priceless.
Random neural firing: I have a niece named Sophie. I'm certain she isn't Kharadjai though.
I look forward to the next chapter, when Scott crashes Slughorn's do with his whole posse in tow! |
| Wednesday 3rd December 2008 00:16 | That Terrifying Momentum (Author Response) |
Well Scott was in rare form this chapter, even in the abridged version. Is Hermione EVER going to figure out he is (mostly) jerking her chain?
I think she probably knows, but she really can't help herself.
I was never a chemist so I had to open another web window to look up the various meds Scott mentioned.
It's very gratifying to know that all my research was appreciated by someone. My dedication to at least the pretense of realism won't allow me to make stuff like that up.
Random neural firing: I have a niece named Sophie. I'm certain she isn't Kharadjai though.
Totally certain? Or just mostly certain?
I look forward to the next chapter, when Scott crashes Slughorn's do with his whole posse in tow!
Scott certainly seems to expect an event of some sort. We'll see whether he's right or not. |
