moralitas
Saturday 15th August 2009 03:14 | She's Ron's Sister |
| a nice short story. dosnt have much actual content, but it does leave the imagination in overdrive, which i suppose is the aim of a short story. |
moralitas
Saturday 15th August 2009 03:14 | She's Ron's Sister |
| a nice short story. dosnt have much actual content, but it does leave the imagination in overdrive, which i suppose is the aim of a short story. |
moralitas
Saturday 15th August 2009 03:14 | She's Ron's Sister |
| a nice short story. dosnt have much actual content, but it does leave the imagination in overdrive, which i suppose is the aim of a short story. |
musings
Monday 10th August 2009 13:02 | She's Ron's Sister |
| This was a lovely read -- thank you for sharing it with us! |
| Thursday 13th August 2009 13:36 | She's Ron's Sister (Author Response) |
| And Thank You for reading and reviewing! |
The Boss
Wednesday 5th August 2009 22:09 | She's Ron's Sister |
Nice ending to the story =]
Great piece of work
The Boss |
| Thursday 13th August 2009 13:35 | She's Ron's Sister (Author Response) |
| Thank You! |
ibelieveintruelove
Monday 27th July 2009 01:11 | She's Ron's Sister |
| Aw yay! That was so cute. I loved Ron's little speech, it's totally something he would say. Great job! |
| Friday 31st July 2009 08:42 | She's Ron's Sister (Author Response) |
| Thank You! I'm pleased you thought it was in character and as I said before, I really loved writing Ron's speech. I find he's portrayed more of an idiot than he actually is; clueless, yes but stupid, I don't think so. Thank you again. |
DukeBrymin
Thursday 23rd July 2009 13:44 | She's Ron's Sister |
Cute, I like seeing inside of Harry's head like that, and what was with Ginny holding hands with him? But, there was too much angst for the pay-off, in my opinion.
One problem:
Harry says, "I've only got a year on you--not even that." That's not correct, he's actually a year and 11 days older than she is.
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| Friday 31st July 2009 08:39 | She's Ron's Sister (Author Response) |
| Thank You The Ginny holding hands thing was just supposed to be (from her point of view) as a friendship thing. I find angst easier to write (but it depresses me so rarely do it) but I appreciate it's not everyone's cup of tea. Thank you for the correction, I didn't know when Ginny was born and guessed it would be before July- but now I know I'll keep that in mind for the future! |
Kathryn
Thursday 23rd July 2009 05:43 | She's Ron's Sister |
This is very sweet and has left me with a smile on my face. I also like your a portrayal of Ron, who is not an idoet by any means.
Keep up the good work. |
| Thursday 23rd July 2009 06:48 | She's Ron's Sister (Author Response) |
| Thank You- I certainly don't think he's an Idiot, no matter how much the moviemakers want to make us think so I will try my best |
bcollins
Wednesday 22nd July 2009 21:31 | She's Ron's Sister |
Oh I loved this - I loved the way you took us on Harry jouney, his thought process hin inability to fight what couldn't BE fought and isn't that the way love REALLY is .....sigh, LOL
Ron turned to him and said, quickly and uncomfortably, “I know you like her, Harry; I’m not blind — despite what people think. I know you would be good for her; you’re the only one I would ever think was good enough for my sister. I’d rather it was you than anyone else, so please take care of her.”
I guess that's the way we ALL feel about the Harry- Ginny relationship. I well written story thatnks |
| Thursday 23rd July 2009 06:47 | She's Ron's Sister (Author Response) |
| Thank You So Much- I'm glad you enjoyed it. That's certainly how I see it, thank you again. Your review has done this- to me! |
Dad
Tuesday 21st July 2009 12:13 | She's Ron's Sister |
| Nice and gentle. Good read. |
| Thursday 23rd July 2009 06:45 | She's Ron's Sister (Author Response) |
| Thank You! |
zeta_one
Monday 20th July 2009 10:19 | She's Ron's Sister |
| Great little missing moment. I enjoyed the talk with Ron. Thanks for sharing. |
| Monday 20th July 2009 10:25 | She's Ron's Sister (Author Response) |
| I enjoyed writing the talk with Ron Thank you for reviewing. |
RIPHedwig
Monday 20th July 2009 09:29 | She's Ron's Sister |
yay for Ginnt
Loved that
B |
| Monday 20th July 2009 10:25 | She's Ron's Sister (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
RIPHedwig
Monday 20th July 2009 09:29 | She's Ron's Sister |
| Ginny. Not Ginnt. Haha. |
Patches
Monday 20th July 2009 08:02 | She's Ron's Sister |
| Very well done. I wondered at the small number of words but this works. Thanks for another view of Harry and Ginny getting together. p |
| Monday 20th July 2009 09:28 | She's Ron's Sister (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I was going to make it longer but I didn't think it needed to go any further, so I'm glad that it seems to be the right decision. |
Trelawney2213
Monday 20th July 2009 04:16 | She's Ron's Sister |
Very nicely done. You've captured quintessential 'girl behavior' with Hermione gestured to Ginny and they both stood up and with the subtlety of a crash landing meteor and gave the boys some privacy. while capturing true 'boyness' with They both sat there for a while, not knowing what to do before they awkwardly hugged; it was quick and accompanied by a pat on the back before they grinned at one another. A very enjoyable read-plain and simple. |
| Monday 20th July 2009 06:04 | She's Ron's Sister (Author Response) |
| Thank You for such a lovely review- And none of it would have been possible without you, so thank you again. |
