JustAFan
Tuesday 18th May 2010 21:36 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| Well this is the second time that I've read what you have so far, and I have thoroughly enjoyed it. Some of the plot in earlier chapters felt like you were rushing through it, but this chapter did not feel that way. I probably mirror Sirius' feelings about all of the tatoos, but then I'm a dad. I enjoyed the teaching that is echoed through the creation of the sword, but I felt like the absence of Sirius meant that he was hardly their as Harry v2.0 forged his sword. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you!!! |
JustAFan
Monday 17th May 2010 23:37 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| Well this is the second time that I've read what you have so far, and I have thoroughly enjoyed it. Some of the plot in earlier chapters felt like you were rushing through it, but this chapter did not feel that way. I probably mirror Sirius' feelings about all of the tatoos, but then I'm a dad. I enjoyed the teaching that is echoed through the creation of the sword, but I felt like the absence of Sirius meant that he was hardly their as Harry v2.0 forged his sword. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you!!! |
JustAFan
Friday 25th December 2009 07:43 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| Lots of fun to read! Great job! |
Dyrke
Thursday 19th November 2009 22:46 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| Hey just found this story and i love it. Can not wait till the next chapter is up. |
Steven Carnell
Wednesday 9th September 2009 16:23 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| Good, engaging, well written story. Very creative take on Ms Rowling's universe. Well done. 9/10. |
memasuzy
Tuesday 8th September 2009 22:04 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
Good chapter. I'm happy to see that Harry is with Padfoot earlier in the story. It will give them more time together and a chance to develop their relationship.
Looking forward to your next update!
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LeprechaunJV
Tuesday 8th September 2009 01:52 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
Look forward to harry meeting the weasleys...... update soon...
Excellent chapter..... the idea of forging a sword to perfection and thus also forging the mind, body and soul is excellent.......
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