sbmcneil
Monday 30th January 2017 19:42 | Everything |
| Loved the story! I can really see Harry being so mushy about Ginny. Very sweet and fluffy |
J-TGriffy
Friday 2nd March 2012 13:54 | Everything |
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fl4v1nh4_
Tuesday 28th September 2010 17:45 | Everything |
| Seriously... I'm reading all of your H/G fics and loving them! Do good! Congrats |
webster
Monday 19th April 2010 11:14 | Everything |
| Very Sweet! |
brios
Tuesday 29th September 2009 09:50 | Everything |
| I simply love it, and I really don't like to read first-person fics, so consider it very well done |
aharkins
Friday 18th September 2009 10:23 | Everything |
It's a beautiful story, not a silly one. It gave me warm fuzzies and I like it when a story does that.
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Dad
Thursday 17th September 2009 12:33 | Everything |
| Nice and gentle. |
majolie
Wednesday 16th September 2009 18:05 | Everything |
| So sweet. I always enjoy a good wedding fic! The first person POV felt a little odd - I guess I have not read too much of that from Harry's POV, but once I got used to it I got into the story. Thanks you for continuing to feed my need for continuous H/G fluff! |
Ocean Dream
Tuesday 15th September 2009 17:45 | Everything |
Come on, this story wasn't silly at all!
A bit...fluffy, maybe, but it was such a nice change to get this over-sentimental Harry instead of his usual self! It was his wedding day and THE night after all and don't we girls deserve a little hope that it means something special even to those supposedly strong and rational creaturs called men?
Thanks for posting it here - and now I'm off to brush my teeth |
| Tuesday 15th September 2009 22:42 | Everything (Author Response) |
A bit fluffy? You're being very generous! When I posted this in my LiveJournal, I warned everyone that they were going to need toothbrushes and floss. I probably should've done it here, too, huh?
(The silly comment was more me whinging that it took me five attempts to get something...anything our of the prompt. I mean, really. Five tries?? I felt like I spent a very long time going to get it written!)
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!
Julie |
Auntie Minerva
Tuesday 15th September 2009 06:07 | Everything |
| This is lovely. I sensed some nice maturity underlying the story, too. It made me smile and --this is a nice aside -- think about my own wedding and marriage. (After being married 22 years I am no moony-eyed kid, so that is saying something!) Nice job! |
| Tuesday 15th September 2009 22:35 | Everything (Author Response) |
Thanks! It makes me happy that this made you think about your own wedding. My husband and I have been married for almost 19 years ourselves, so I know all about not being a moony-eyed kid! )
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Zia Montrose
Monday 14th September 2009 14:22 | Everything |
I clicked on this because I read an L/J story of yours previously which delighted me -- and which I *really* should go back and leave a review for now.
I loved Harry's voice throughout this. Very tender and sentimental but still believably a bloke's.
These were some favorite bits:
Well, I've always been a bit thick when it comes to girls.
We've yelled and screamed and cried and come out the other side leaning on each other for strength again.
The temptation of her body when we were alone, when she was kissing along my jaw and under my ear, her hands running up under my shirt, almost did me in, and more than once.
I much enjoyed it! |
| Tuesday 15th September 2009 22:33 | Everything (Author Response) |
Ooh, thank you! I'm really glad you thought Harry still sounded like a bloke. As a woman, it's hard to know how men think sometimes, you know?
Thanks again!
Julie |
Grandma Kate
Monday 14th September 2009 08:49 | Everything |
| You definitely do not suck at writing something that fits the lyrics you were given. This story IS Harry in love, besotted, and grateful for his Ginny. |
| Tuesday 15th September 2009 22:31 | Everything (Author Response) |
LOL. I was more saying that I sucked because it took me so many tries to get the story to behave (I mean, really, five attempts?).
And I love the word besotted.
Thanks for reviewing!
Julie |
The Boss
Monday 14th September 2009 07:31 | Everything |
Wow - I love how you developed this story from Harry's point of view - it works really well. Also the poking and the tittering really set the scene for me. Well done You should be proud of this piece - Its great
The Boss |
| Tuesday 15th September 2009 22:29 | Everything (Author Response) |
Oh, thanks! I really appreciate the compliment, especially because I had such a hard time when I was writing it!
Julie |
Arnel
Monday 14th September 2009 07:05 | Everything |
No matter how many attempts you made at finding a story for the lyrics, this story is a wonderful depiction of Harry's feelings for Ginny. You don't really think of Harry as being emotionally sappy, but I think that when it came to Ginny, he turned to mush even at the age of twelve. The line that seals this idea for me is this one, "When I was a child, trapped at the Dursleys', wondering why nobody loved me, I used to dream of having someone like her in my life."
I give this story for making me feel all happy and mushy inside, too. |
| Tuesday 15th September 2009 22:27 | Everything (Author Response) |
Oh, thanks Arnel! I really appreciate the compliment.
I think "my" Harry is a little sappy, but he's not really able to express his emotions very well (thanks to the stupid Dursleys), if that makes sense.
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ngayonatkailanman
Monday 14th September 2009 05:43 | Everything |
| Ahhhh. Bless. Harry deserves this happiness and more!! Excellent work |
| Tuesday 15th September 2009 22:24 | Everything (Author Response) |
Thanks so much!
And yes, he totally deserves all the happiness he can get his hands on! |
