Arnel
Tuesday 26th January 2010 23:48 | Beyond the Proposal |
| Your Ron is right on the money. I laughed my way through this chapter just because of Ron's humorous way of looking at things. And then there's Ginny... I loved how the boys could shut her up just by mentioning Molly! I didn't even mind Ginny's swearing because it was so typically her! Great chapter that I give to. I'm looking forward to Chapter 3. |
| Thursday 28th January 2010 00:36 | Beyond the Proposal (Author Response) |
And then there's Ginny... I loved how the boys could shut her up just by mentioning Molly!
And that would work with any of the Weasley children too |
clare
Tuesday 26th January 2010 15:55 | Beyond the Proposal |
| Another very good chapter and Ron is so sweet in this chapter, I'm really looking forward tp your next chapter. |
| Thursday 28th January 2010 00:34 | Beyond the Proposal (Author Response) |
| thank you |
Dad
Tuesday 26th January 2010 12:34 | Beyond the Proposal |
| He had a laugh, but Ron seemed more mature than Harry or Ginny in this scene. |
| Thursday 28th January 2010 00:34 | Beyond the Proposal (Author Response) |
| yeah maybe, i'm not sure he would have been the same if it was days before his wedding tho |
ngayonatkailanman
Monday 25th January 2010 20:47 | Beyond the Proposal |
| LOL. I did not realise that being in hospital could be such fun! |
| Thursday 28th January 2010 00:33 | Beyond the Proposal (Author Response) |
| oh anywhere can be fun |
Ocean Dream
Monday 25th January 2010 14:56 | Beyond the Proposal |
| Btw, it's Falling For You, isn't it? |
| Thursday 28th January 2010 00:32 | Beyond the Proposal (Author Response) |
| well done 10 points! |
RIPHedwig
Monday 25th January 2010 14:51 | Beyond the Proposal |
| Yay. More please? B |
| Thursday 28th January 2010 00:31 | Beyond the Proposal (Author Response) |
| Shouldn't be too long, I'm hoping to update every week |
Ocean Dream
Monday 25th January 2010 14:48 | Beyond the Proposal |
It was hard not to find this amusing. The Boy-Who-Lived was lying in a hospital bed. The hero of the wizarding world who was scared of both his mum and sister. He didn't want to know in the slightest what caused Harry to smile like that, as he was sure that he would have to Scourgify his eyes and perform a Memory Charm if he did. It had to be the Weasley temper and nothing else that caused Ginny to get her way. He guessed he was lucky that Hermione's parents were very passive Muggle dentists
Ronnie's such a sweetie, isn't he?
Harry just looked purely and simply happy. ... How could he begrudge a relationship that did that to his best mate?
Yep, he is!
I think you did an extremely good job on depicting Ron's relationship (well, his love indeed) to Ginny.
However, the moment I enjoyed most was the eye-communication between Harry and Ginny. You are right that it seems to be the bravest (and most difficult) thing in many relationships, yet it suits H&G perfectly, it shows the bond JKR hinted but didn't really show.
Great chapter. Who's next? |
| Thursday 28th January 2010 00:31 | Beyond the Proposal (Author Response) |
Ronnie's such a sweetie, isn't he?
Oh he is.
I think you did an extremely good job on depicting Ron's relationship (well, his love indeed) to Ginny.
yeah he can be a prat at times but that is thro love and because they have such a close relationship.
However, the moment I enjoyed most was the eye-communication between Harry and Ginny. You are right that it seems to be the bravest (and most difficult) thing in many relationships, yet it suits H&G perfectly
and after all that they have been tho at such a tender age, how could they not be like that?
Great chapter. Who's next?
Ginny |
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Monday 25th January 2010 11:34 | Beyond the Proposal |
great banter in this between ron, ginny and harry - its very real.
excellent writing |
| Monday 25th January 2010 11:58 | Beyond the Proposal (Author Response) |
| Oh that (as always) was a lot of fun to write too |
Grandma Kate
Monday 25th January 2010 09:23 | Beyond the Proposal |
Oh I love this. in particular-
Harry had actually proposed to her after she was lying in a bed at St Mungo’s after a Bludger to the head
It's very good. |
| Monday 25th January 2010 11:57 | Beyond the Proposal (Author Response) |
i like that too, and enjoyed writing that scene in another piece. Actually I will give ten points for gryffindor if you know which fic this links into? |
blue_and_white_witch
Monday 25th January 2010 08:49 | Beyond the Proposal |
| very good! |
| Monday 25th January 2010 11:55 | Beyond the Proposal (Author Response) |
| thank you |
brown_eyes
Monday 25th January 2010 07:29 | Beyond the Proposal |
Excellent, fast updates!
Another really good, really fun chapter. |
| Monday 25th January 2010 11:55 | Beyond the Proposal (Author Response) |
| thank you |
