kash2210
Friday 17th October 2008 09:58 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| A good start to what looks like will be an interesting story! |
TangoCharlie
Friday 3rd October 2008 06:55 | A Wrinkle in Time |
A great opening chapter. You've certainly caught my interest! I like the pace you've set here... we didn't have to wait too long to get stuck into the story.
The concept of wishing stones is very original - I really like that you've still kept it within the bounds of 'reality' in the HP universe. |
veghindu101
Tuesday 26th August 2008 14:42 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| Aww, how cute. And Harry is not one to initiate displays of affection unless he's REALLY touched. |
Prongs739
Friday 22nd August 2008 08:11 | A Wrinkle in Time |
No action, yet very interesting with the Wishing Rock.
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PhoenixFeathers
Tuesday 19th August 2008 19:16 | A Wrinkle in Time |
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.........................
Very interesting indeed....
But how's he gonna see his parents?
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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 19th March 2008 06:46 | A Wrinkle in Time |
wow!!! Thats a really neat stone... so how are they going to go see harry's parents....
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daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 31st May 2006 17:11 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| I remember read a story on here about a stone. But it didn't grant wishes, it showed the future or the past. I don't remember which one. But so far, this is a good story. |
critmo
Tuesday 15th November 2005 04:58 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| Well done so far. The wish will be interesting. |
Black_White_And_Grey
Friday 18th March 2005 18:41 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| Okay, I've only read the first chapter as of yet, so I'll probably review this again.... I love it so far! Everybody is in character so well, it almost astounds me. But what I don't understand is how Harry could see his parents if in the book it says that it cannot bring back the dead. *Scratches head is puzzlement*. I'll have to keep reading! See ya! ;) :) |
lil steph
Monday 28th February 2005 14:52 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| i really like this story its awsome!!! |
Kelleypen
Wednesday 23rd February 2005 17:03 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| So it's to be a little AU trip. Good, I like them when they're well-written. |
