The Boss
Wednesday 17th March 2010 20:24 | Grapefruit and Orchids |
Aww lovely piece!!!! I really like the last two sentences"I already do," she answered so only he could hear it. His hand momentarily brushed hers, and she felt the electricity in their touch.
Is there going to be a follow up piece to this story? Because this one was very well written!
The Boss |
| Friday 25th June 2010 20:44 | Grapefruit and Orchids (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your review. I'm not sure if I'll do more with it or not. We'll see what the muse does. |
Patches
Sunday 7th March 2010 02:26 | Grapefruit and Orchids |
| This is an excellent view of the "Severus almost gets killed by Remus" stories. Thank you for this better look at that occasion. p |
| Sunday 7th March 2010 20:27 | Grapefruit and Orchids (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your review. I'd read too many versions of that story that didn't quite ring true in my heart, so I had to write my own. |
Arnel
Tuesday 16th February 2010 10:29 | Grapefruit and Orchids |
| A thoroughly enjoyable and amusing story. I'm glad Lily was able to change her mind about James, especially since he was trying so hard all year to prove himself worthy of her friendship. I give this story for making me smile. |
| Sunday 7th March 2010 20:28 | Grapefruit and Orchids (Author Response) |
| Thanks Arnel. I'm glad you liked it. You were a big help to me betaing it. |
Dad
Sunday 14th February 2010 06:02 | Grapefruit and Orchids |
| Nice one. |
| Sunday 7th March 2010 20:28 | Grapefruit and Orchids (Author Response) |
| thank you |
Grandma Kate
Sunday 14th February 2010 02:34 | Grapefruit and Orchids |
| Nice and fluffy. I like your James. |
| Sunday 7th March 2010 20:29 | Grapefruit and Orchids (Author Response) |
| I always see James as having a little more common sense than Sirius. I don't think Sirius is bad, just impulsive. Thanks for the review. |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 13th February 2010 21:04 | Grapefruit and Orchids |
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| Sunday 7th March 2010 20:32 | Grapefruit and Orchids (Author Response) |
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