kash2210
Friday 17th October 2008 10:26 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| I've just finished this chapter with a wide smile on my face, a lovely written chapter! |
TangoCharlie
Friday 3rd October 2008 07:27 | A Wrinkle in Time |
I'm glad we got to see a glimps of Weasley-life passed. Comforting to know that Fred and George were trouble makers from the get-go.
The encounter with Malfoy was both amusing and chilling. A nice touch.
After thinking to myself that the way Harry and Ginny's relationship was progressing was so nice, it was a bit of a shock to have Harry suddenly realise that he's in love with her. They've shared some very affectionate, yet friendly, moments, so I thought we were going to see Harry as he gradually got to know Ginny better and developed a closer friendship with her before he really came to appreciate how deep his feelings for her run... Oh well, theres still some very interesting potential in his recent discovering which should make their next week most entertaining... |
Prongs739
Friday 22nd August 2008 08:34 | A Wrinkle in Time |
This is one of most intrigruing stories I have ever read on the website. I wonder if they get together?
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Prongs739
Friday 22nd August 2008 08:34 | A Wrinkle in Time |
This is one of most intrigruing stories I have ever read on the website. I wonder if they get together?
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Prongs739
Friday 22nd August 2008 08:33 | A Wrinkle in Time |
This is one of most intrigruing stories I have ever read on the website. I wonder if they get together?
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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 19th March 2008 07:00 | A Wrinkle in Time |
awww!!! thats so cute!!!
I could see them running into trouble with the fact that they look like james and lilly....
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daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 31st May 2006 17:59 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| Well that's a good way to start the time trip. I like it. Keep it up. |
Kelleypen
Wednesday 23rd February 2005 17:17 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| first of all, little Fred and George were adorably funny. Secondly, nice build up for Harry and Ginny. I'm purring. |
parakletos
Sunday 12th December 2004 14:58 | A Wrinkle in Time |
Now why didn't I spot this one before ?
Brit Pick time.... the drive from Exeter to London is very long if you
take liberties with the speed limit , but in cab it would take
forever. *grin* A cab suggests a Black Cab which wouldn't do this run.
It is also the case , probably *grin*, that the notes he has from the
90's are not legal tender in the 80's.
But hey this is fluff and why am I getting so worked up *laughs*... onto the next chapter...
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Stormdelver
Thursday 2nd December 2004 17:29 | A Wrinkle in Time |
Oh-how do you possibly write so many stories-all at once-and so well. This one is tops, I am only a bit shocked over the use of such a valuable object- if Merlin used it to defeat dark wizards- ought not have Harry tried to use it for the same reasons- still if he ends up with Ginny it would be worth that and more
Bravo |
| Sunday 12th December 2004 16:29 | A Wrinkle in Time (Author Response) |
This story was actually written over a year ago. I'm only just now getting around to posting it here. :o
Merlin used a different wishing stone than what Harry and Ginny are
using, so that would explain why no one knew about it until now.
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amamama
Monday 4th October 2004 12:36 | A Wrinkle in Time |
Drat... why can't three chapters last a little longer? Needless to say, I like this story. And what a wonderful use for the wishing stone! I think I would have used it to gain knowledge, but this is very sweet. 23 galleons for a room fifteen years ago sounds awfully expensive, but that might be because the demand for wizard accomodations in London is so big?
I really look forward to see what happens next - it's a good thing the next chapter is in beta. Keep going! |
| Sunday 28th November 2004 18:18 | A Wrinkle in Time (Author Response) |
Just catching up on some reviews.
Unlike the Muggle world, Wizarding currency has little inflation - it's
why there's a large discrepancy between the Pound and the
Galleon. Also, there is only one or two Wizarding hotels in
London - IMO.
I've actually finished this story (it's my first) so hopefully, you'll
end up liking the rest of it as much as this first bit. It's far
too fluffy for my writing style now, but we all have to start
somewhere.
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