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Wednesday 7th April 2010 13:10 | Harry Potter: Identity | nice chapter!
And ive wondered that too... why do they move closer to their jobs when there is apparating and flooing lol | | Wednesday 7th April 2010 13:32 | Harry Potter: Identity (Author Response) | | Thanks! | Patches
Tuesday 30th March 2010 03:58 | Harry Potter: Identity | | This is a really good chapter. I'm so glad Adam got to go back and meet his oldest friends Laura and Luke. It is even better that Ginny got to go with him. I love the way she reacted when he gave her the necklace. That was a special gift and I really liked when he said, "Yes Boss!" When she told him to save his money for his future. That was great. I recall a note from history that President Truman call his wife, Bess, The Boss. Just a little side annedote of my own. I also liked the fact that Adam picked up on the fact that Remus blushed when he mentioned Tonks should stay for "tea"! I'm sorry to see that Adam is starting to have scar pains. That would have been a surprise to him. Not ever seeing the scar before he wouldn't have a frame of refrence. Of course Voldemort knows Harry Potter is alive because Wormtail would have told. him. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p | | Tuesday 30th March 2010 04:03 | Harry Potter: Identity (Author Response) | | Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. | kathrine_21
Sunday 28th March 2010 03:41 | Harry Potter: Identity | I can't believe there are over 6,000 words in this chapter I read it so quickly. Your style of writing flows so well, and each (quickly produced) chapter is as good, if not better, than the previous one!
I am really enjoying your work, and I don't normally read WIP stories as I don't appreciate long delays in posting! I do appreciate you though! Keep up the good work and thank you.
Sue | | Sunday 28th March 2010 14:01 | Harry Potter: Identity (Author Response) | | Thanks for the review! I can't stand waiting either So i make sure I have enough material to do one chapter per week before I start posting a book. | colmshan
Saturday 27th March 2010 18:28 | Harry Potter: Identity | | I liked it yet again, keep up the good work, and the impressive speed at which you post. | | Sunday 28th March 2010 01:49 | Harry Potter: Identity (Author Response) | | Thanks! |
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