Well I see you had no trouble in making sure Dumbledore died on schedule. I'm sure Scott isn't dead, not entirely dead anyway, he'll be back. Like his death in the collapsing building.

This will be my 1st review and I am sorry for not commenting on the other 20 or so chapters

I like the story, in fact I love it. As an American, I have laughed over the comments by Scott. Brits aren't used to a lot of our comments , and I tried to imagine the reactions of Harry and the gang.

I would like to say that you have written a brilliant story, I love the way you portray the characters, and you done a darn fine job. Thank you for writing the story and for writing it so well. I look forward to the next chapter. Again, thank you for an outstanding story.

Drako got away with everything in cannon-- looks like he will in your story as well.Neither Snape or Drako have any redeeming qualities in my opinion - I hate them both.

Why did you let Dumbledore commit suicide when he wasn't weakened by the poison as in the book?

You made Scott a eunuch in this story so far.

You are an excellent writer- I shall continue to read this story to see where it goes. Thank you.

I love your story (and you for writing it).

This is the best fan fic I have ever read.

I look forward to more updates and witty author notes (because those are fun too).

Not to be completely scary stalkerish, I wish we could hang out. You would be the friend I would love to have over because you would have me laughing all the time, even though I wouldn't know what you're talking about. Really.

I hope you're not too tortured (or freaked out by my review) and that you update soon. You are an artist. And a good one.

You left me completely speechless here. What an amazing chapter.

harry......what a guy.

A very gripping, action-packed chapter. Harry's pursuit of Snape is one of the best scenes in this story. I'll have to read JKR's version again to decide if I actually like yours better.

However, I missed all the jokes and stuff. Did you really think we'd ever grow tired of Scott's humour!!?? (totally unfair criticism designed to healthfully balance my praise).

Good read.

What a chapter. I doubt Scott is really dead. I hope Harry and Ginny talk about Ginny feeling left out and their relationship doesn't suffer for it. Did Lila kill any important Death Eaters? What will happen now?

I hope you update soon.

You're a cynic. and yes, that's slightly a compliment. XD

very good chapter, though you're still mean. Just are, cause I said so.

Cant think up a really thoughtful review right now, but i figured I'd say hey, I read it, it was good, all that jazzy stuff. I'm really tired though, so I think I shall leave you....maybe

Oh, I liked how Harry just went all grrr baddass me smash on Snape. It was good. And Snape must have been all, wtf. It was good, and if I werent drained of energy I probably would have shouted out and woken the neighborhood. Yay no whimpy Harry!

Now, we readers would enjoy it if you stopped being a tortured artist and wrote more, but I know what the torturous bit is about...I'm an artist from all angles, so I can understand it.

So I wont harp on you too much.

Great chapter...intense all the way through....especially the Harry/Snape battle.

Having said that, I do have to add that your Author's Notes are the best I've ever read. Freed from the need to stay within the priorities of the story, you give us a whole other treat. I look forward to them...and I can understand when you might feel like not including one.

Thanks for being the artist that you are.