I.Hate.You.

I say these words with as much love as possible seeings as because of you I was assigned 3 hours of chores this afternoon. You see, I discovered your wonderfully delightful story on fanfiction.net last night at about 4 and read a couple chapters. I came back to it at 9. I read until 5am. I then went to lie down momentarily and slept till noon.

I have now gone and created an account here rather than my fanfic.net account because of your whining over how much fanfic.net sucks. (IMHO i understand, the story was impossible to follow and i read several chapters over until i discovered when and where the scene changes were)

Your work is bloody brilliant and i had been looking forward to not sleeping for a bit longer, 'cept you haven't written more. So instead I came here and read all you author's comments and anything else i couldn't find on fanfic.net.

Anyway, enough with my sarcasm ridden complaints.

S'bloody fuckin brilliant what you've got goin on here. I've never read any other Harry/Ginny that was written so well (the only other one that comes close had conspicuous amounts of sex in it which excused such mistakes as spelling Charlie as "Charley")

I'm trying to put how much i love this into words. I can't count the number of times i've actually laughed and then gone silent hoping i didn't wake my parents up because i was laughing so hard. I would kiss you if i could (or on second thought, a male equivalent that would be acceptable)

I'd buy you some very expensive burbon. Everyone likes burbon-or atleast they should.

I'm going to go find some poorly written fan-fic with sex in it now, which is what i was looking for in this in the first place.

This was better then what i was hoping for. Harry should probably Cop a feel pretty soon here tho

Well, that was interesting. Not at all what I expected, yet I am not at all surprised by the relative mayhem you dished out. I am curious if any Death Eaters we know have had their card punched and thus will not be around to annoy Harry later on like they did in Cannon.

So where is the locket, that should have been hinted at, but again, this is your story, if I want the story my way, I should write my own.

All in all very entertaining. I would have reviewed earlier, but I recently started reading this story and figured I should just leave a review when I caught up with you. Well, then keep it up. Kill lots more death eaters and lets get this shoot em up fest really going!

Anyway, I'll stop stroking your ego, and (im)patiently await more.

As much as I would love a picture of your balls, I can't really guess for sure what the title is foreshadowing...

But I'm not very good at figuring out things before they happen in books. ^_^' Unless it's a really crappy and predictable story, which this is most definitely not.

In any case, I have to tell you again how much I love this story and can't wait to read more. I know you get that all the time, but it's true.

I have the ff.net version bookmarked on my phone so I can randomly read some chapters on break at work.

It's just so ridiculously well written I get sucked in so deeply.

Plus I often go back to refresh my memory on the little notes and such (ie. the encyclopedia definition of BLUE) so that I remember all that's been revealed about Scott and Lila's world so far. 26 chapters and I still never want this to end.

Anyway, I'll stop stroking your ego, and (im)patiently await more.

And just to try and drill it into your head some more, please get to work on writing an original novel.

I think a hardcover novel starring Scott and his awesome universe would be a lot more memorable on my shelf than a photograph of your balls. Or a signed copy of it with a photo of your balls enclosed, lol!

First time I liked the chapter better than the author's notes...

The chapter is a wonderfully calm and comforting contrast to the battle scenes. I really appreciated it. The Ginny/Harry and the Neville/Luna scenes are very sweet

It's a good thing, too, that you finally devoted some space and time to Ron. I always felt you were neglecting him. When it comes to the canon characters, you spend much more time and energy on the girls (who consequently turn out to be much more interesting than the boys). Ginny, Luna and Hermione are all very convincing and well written; maybe you could do the same for Ron in the future?

Cheerio!

I must admit that I'm taking some credit for praising your Chapter 25 AN, which caused you to decide that "I really shine when it comes to writing self-loathing, pseudo-witty blurbs."

...and laughed out loud all the way through this one, especially: "But I think we can all safely conclude that it�s a pretty accurate prediction of events."

Haven't read the AN yet, so this is just on the story itself.

Am quite struck by the coherence with which you comprehensively cover the awake characters.

I've always liked your writing but in this chapter...there's an elegance to the flow of the story that's quite striking. It would sound flippant to suggest that maybe that comes from Scott being unconscious...but there may be some truth there.

Anyway, you should be rightfully proud of this one.

Finally I have been moved to write a review--if only based on your last author's note!!

Your writing is thoroughly engrossing and I eagerly await each update. You have created new characters that stand on their own,and combined with HP it adds drama and excitement to an already good story. Love It!!

Not sure I'm ready to see your balls though--lol.

I'm sure, after your author's note, that your name has gone on my boyfriends list of 'to kills'.

Now, that's not to say I know the reference to the chapter/album name, so I think I am safe from learning the intricacies of your balls for the time being.

And do not worry for I tend to draw, and I picture moments of stuff I write as well, and I see them vividly. I really do actually like the picture you described, and now I kinda wanna try out drawing it. Not sure how it will turn out but, it could be okay.

Anyway, on to the chapter.

I liked seeing the insight to all the characters. One thing that bugged the hell out of me with JK's books is all you saw was Harry, when there was so much else and so many other emotions going around. Other authors tend to express the supporting character's through dialogue if they avoid switching POVs constantly. JK did not do this, and it bothered me. The only real insight we gain from the book is all inferred outside of Harry.

Also, the scene between Neville and Luna - brilliantly done. I truly loved it. They are my favorite characters, as I have probably noted previously.

The awkwardness of Neville, and Luna's total disregard for it, was completely on point with their characters in my opinion. I really loved that scene, it made me smile quite a bit, and it was sweet at the same time. I'm sure my dad has you to blame for my busting his eardrum with my random screech of laughter during that scene, however.

I liked how, even when he had just been revived and was near death yet again, Scott managed to trade commentary that may or may not be witty with Lila. It just seemed very him.

You characterized Ron and Hermione very well. Not much out of the normal for them, so I can't say much. However, I did like how you had Ron fighting himself, and commenting on the gentlemanly thing as well as how death was drawing his mind from the present. That was very well done. You did make me picture the scenes, though maybe not as precise as you see them yourself, but I did see them. I could see Ron and Hermione right there next to Harry's bed, both saddened and hurting, near their own personal breaking point.

Also, maybe you should have slept instead of playing a game, given that you commented on needing sleep several times, and you were not as self-deprecating as normal in your author's note. That in itself is enough to worry.