Patches
Sunday 1st September 2013 04:08 | Flying Free |
| Wow! I was amazed when Harry got hurt in the Falcons game and the stupid crowd cheered. The the idiots realized what they were doing. Then to have Ginny reinstated was great. The way she attacked Harry was funny. She didn't even notice that he was almost undressed and then she wakes up in his jersey! Talk about fast move. I am surprised she wore his jersey to her Harpies Quidditch practice. I look forward to more of this story. p |
hagridsheart
Tuesday 16th November 2010 12:01 | Flying Free |
Another awesome chapter, please update soon!
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| Tuesday 16th November 2010 13:11 | Flying Free (Author Response) |
| Thank you Mr. Hagrid. I'll see what I can do on the update front. |
The Boss
Monday 15th November 2010 05:36 | Flying Free |
YAY! They are finally 'officially' together as a couple! Good to see that they have made it eventually!
I really like how this story is coming along and they way that you are writing it is exceptional quality Ao please keep more of this story, and other stories coming along, as I wish to keep on reading.
One question, do you have any idea as to how long you are intending on making the whole story chapter wise?
Regards
The Boss |
| Tuesday 16th November 2010 08:00 | Flying Free (Author Response) |
Thanks again Boss. I really appreciate your reviews. I do have another story, Love and Sacrifice, but I've decided to hold off on that one until I finish Flying Free. Writing two stores at once was just too much for me with my travel schedule.
As for length, that's a very good question. I had originally intended it to be about 15 chapters, but I may cut that down to like 10-12. We'll have to see how long it takes me to get to 10.
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Eduarda23
Tuesday 9th November 2010 09:53 | Flying Free |
Hey there,
Really nice chapter, though i was hoping for more moments of Harry and Ginny together.Maybe next time?
Specially liked the quidditch match and the uncommon confident side of him,that is usually written as shy in relationships.
ps: i thought that Ginny loving him so soon was a bit creapy,but guess is relative. |
| Tuesday 16th November 2010 07:58 | Flying Free (Author Response) |
Thanks for the review. I'll try to get more Harry/Ginny moments in there. Those are the hardest moments for me to write for some reason, but I promise I'll try!
I guess I can see that being somewhat unusual but they spent some time together and maybe they just fit? Love at first fight? |
Stag Writer
Monday 8th November 2010 14:17 | Flying Free |
| Brilliant story, I have loved it from the very first chapter! Do update soon |
| Tuesday 16th November 2010 07:57 | Flying Free (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Chapter 7 shouldn't be a whole lot longer. It's actually already written, I'm just making some small changes before packing it off to the good ol beta. |
aimless`
Monday 8th November 2010 13:06 | Flying Free |
| Interesting twist in the story at the end of the chapter. I liked the Quidditch commentations, you write them well . |
| Tuesday 16th November 2010 07:56 | Flying Free (Author Response) |
| Thanks! What will Ginny do is the Million Galleon question. As for the Quidditch commentary, that's what actually started this story. The rest of it kinda grew out of that. |
