Katiee22
Wednesday 31st October 2012 06:04 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Fab! I loved it! You hear too much about how harry is perfect, this is different and so good! |
katte
Friday 4th February 2011 05:14 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| I love this fanfic is so good, the chapter was great keep it up... can't wait for a new one |
| Friday 4th February 2011 10:37 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying and are looking forward to an update |
brittanim
Monday 31st January 2011 20:57 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| i wish you would right more i really liked this and would love you read me |
| Friday 4th February 2011 10:36 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| I am writing more! Glad you like this |
ChaoticK
Saturday 29th January 2011 18:58 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Just happened across this the other day and I'm enjoying it so much! You've presented a very believable (and angsty) view of how H & G might have fared 'after the war' but before the epilogue. I can't wait to see where you take them. |
| Friday 4th February 2011 10:36 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much for leaving a review here. I am glad you are enjoying the story and that you find it to be believable! I'm glad you're looking forward to more. |
Patches
Monday 24th January 2011 05:44 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Wow! This is quite an involved chapter. Ginny really layed it all out for Harry. His problems of depression and needing an objective person to talk to are really becoming more evident. I think he is right, Ginny will forgive him again but how many times will she be able to do that before she starts to resent having to do it? Harry feels lost and alone. When he is with Ginny and they are happy with their activities he is very happy. When Ginny starts asking him to be more open with her he doesn't have any idea where to start. It leaves them both frustrated. I think it is noble of Harry to not take advantage of Ginny when they were making out on the bed but it also leaves her feeling like she gave too much without some kind of commitment from him. I hope he gets some professional help from somone soon. Before he goes too far and drives Ginny away from him. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
| Wednesday 26th January 2011 10:36 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| You were right in saying that Harry's problems are becoming more evident. They have been there all along but the issues he is having are going to rise to the forefront in the next few chapters. They are also going to affect what is going on with his relationship with Ginny as well. The next few chapters will be key in dealing with Harry's feelings and state of mind. I am glad you commented on how noble Harry was in not taking things further than they could have gone. I thought it showed how he really cares about her and views her, especially regarding his thoughts at that section of the story. I agree that Ginny may have felt bad about herself for taking things as far as they went, and I'm glad you said something about that since it made me think! Thanks for reading and commenting Patches, I always look forward to hearing from you! I'm glad you are looking forward to more. Best, R |
chit.94
Sunday 23rd January 2011 22:34 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| You worked really hard on this one, didn't you?! The dialogues are so intense and both Ginny and Harry are completely justified in what they're feeling right now. And yes, I bet it's really frustrating for Ginny to keep enduring Harry's lack of vision concerning what they have going on between them. I think it's about to hit him hard. I hope he finally wakes up to the fact that he loves her. And THANK YOU for getting Molly Weasley into the story-line. A good lecture from her mum is clearly what Ginny needed. Now she can finally concentrate and worry about her life, rather than be gloomy about her relationship status with Harry. I guess another reason why Harry can't tell her that he loves her, is because Ginny's always around for him. And when they separate, he only misses their kisses. Now that Ginny's going to be less clingy and more herself, I hope he sees her for who she is. I hope he starts to notice how vivacious, smart and fun she actually is, apart from her hair, and how well she kisses. Thanks for a great chapter and please update soon! |
| Wednesday 26th January 2011 10:26 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Oh goodness, yes I worked very, very hard on this one and it went through a ALOT of editing! Thanks for noticing. I'm glad you think that the conversation with Molly was what Ginny needed. I agree that sometimes you need someone to tell you what is wrong with the big picture. Now she is apt to start to change things for the better! I agree that Harry should see beyond the hair and the snogging and how she makes him feel and realize why he 'likes' Ginny in the first place. Thanks for the great comments. I look forward to them and am glad you are reading along! |
fio
Sunday 23rd January 2011 21:12 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
Hi, nice chapter, i like the way thing developed between h/g because ginny deserves better.
I feel relieve that you didn't abandoned the story!!!
thanks for a great chapter |
| Wednesday 26th January 2011 09:58 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Your welcome! Thanks for reading. I'm glad you like the chapter. |
romatomato1294
Sunday 23rd January 2011 08:15 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| This is such a great story! I've been reading it since you started posting it. I can't wait to read the next installments and see what will happen to Harry and Ginny. |
| Sunday 23rd January 2011 21:02 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story as I've been posting it, and that you're looking forward to more! |
wildthestral
Saturday 22nd January 2011 12:39 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Another great chapter! I was worried you'd abandoned the story, I missed reading it so much! This chapter was so intense. I feel like kicking Harry! All he has to do is say the words "I Love You!!!!" You did a nice job of portraying the characters in this chapter. I think Harry and Ginny have hit rock bottom (in a good way, I'm not saying the story is bad, I'm saying it's reached the "complication" part). I'm super excited to read what comes next! I can hardly wait!!!!!!!!! |
| Sunday 23rd January 2011 21:09 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Hey there! Of course I'm not abandoning this story! The reason for my delays between updates is that I'm working to perfect my chapters around my very busy and hectic so-called 'real' life. Know that I am always trying my best! Yep, we've definitely hit the 'complication' part of the story, the end of the 'status quo' between Harry and Ginny as another reviewer said. From here on out, we'll see how each character reacts to the situation at hand. Thanks for saying that I did a nice job portraying each character here. I worked very hard on this piece. Glad you're looking forward to more! Thanks again. |
