dun8y
Saturday 7th June 2014 08:45 | Vis Insita |
Moving along nicely! I do like not having to wait for these chapters!
Thank you x |
| Tuesday 17th June 2014 23:07 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| Yeah, I'd imagine that's a benefit. I wish I didn't have to write them, sometimes. |
narumi
Wednesday 13th February 2013 21:11 | Vis Insita |
| "Don't ever enjoy it." - Great line, great rule. I was left frustrated though that there was no further discussion about "why these woods?". Great characterizations this chapter. |
| Friday 15th February 2013 20:25 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| Why these woods? I'm not entirely sure what you mean, but am going to assume you're talking about why the Death Eaters were in the woods by the gas station. Since Scott and Harry are on their own, they don't actually know what the Death Eaters are doing, precisely, and therefore neither do the readers, Scott makes a couple guesses when he says that the DEs probably think Harry is moving on foot and apparating as he goes. |
kopfsalat2000
Sunday 14th October 2012 18:44 | Vis Insita |
Wow... I understand why you decided Scott had to 'grow up'. This is getting dark and ugly, and I like it
So why did you spare Moody? I just noticed, Moody would probably get along well with Scott... interesting thought... |
| Monday 15th October 2012 18:05 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
Wow... I understand why you decided Scott had to 'grow up'. This is getting dark and ugly, and I like it
As long as you like it, we're gravy.
So why did you spare Moody? I just noticed, Moody would probably get along well with Scott... interesting thought...
I don't know if they would get along or not. 'Sparing' Moody was just an outgrowth of the different series of events. |
sylvelle
Thursday 19th July 2012 03:38 | Vis Insita |
| Yep moving along nicely. |
| Saturday 25th August 2012 01:27 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| I was, anyway... |
RubeusHagrid
Thursday 7th June 2012 18:05 | Vis Insita |
| Wait... Scott's going to die of heart disease? |
| Saturday 25th August 2012 01:22 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| Or age. One may come with the other. |
RubeusHagrid
Sunday 8th January 2012 10:15 | Vis Insita |
Yay! Another great chapter! I'm glad you're continuing this story.
I wonder why Scott was hanged... He probably could have avoided it if he really wanted to though...
Also, I have a question. Do Karadjai never die? Scott says that it's less of a permanent state, but does that mean that they don't ever die, no matter what?
So, yeah, I really liked this chapter, and I hope there's another one coming soon! |
| Friday 27th January 2012 09:50 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
Yay! Another great chapter! I'm glad you're continuing this story.
Yeah, me too. I know I haven't been good about updating it.
I wonder why Scott was hanged... He probably could have avoided it if he really wanted to though...
Maybe. Perhaps he felt it was required, or perhaps there wasn't any way out at that point.
Also, I have a question. Do Karadjai never die? Scott says that it's less of a permanent state, but does that mean that they don't ever die, no matter what?
Just as we do, Kharadjai will eventually succumb to the number one cause of death for humans.
So, yeah, I really liked this chapter, and I hope there's another one coming soon!
God, me too. |
lizlovegood12
Thursday 29th December 2011 06:12 | Vis Insita |
| Hey! Nice chapter! I thought you forgot about this story! I'm glad you updated! Hope you'll do it soon again! |
| Sunday 8th January 2012 05:42 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| Oh no, I never forget. Just procrastinate. |
Dad
Wednesday 28th December 2011 07:12 | Vis Insita |
| Slow and steady on the updates, but fabulous writing. Good stuff. |
| Sunday 8th January 2012 05:42 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| Very slow, I know. I hate to tattle on Sherry, but this time she was delayed in posting for several weeks so it's not entirely my fault. Just mostly my fault. At least the writing lived up to your (presumably low) expectations. |
Chatmandu
Wednesday 21st December 2011 06:48 | Vis Insita |
| Creating an attention focus away from what is really going on? Did Scott use a Muggle magic trick with Harry's escape? |
| Sunday 8th January 2012 05:41 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| If you can call something as unsubtle as a distraction grenade any sort of trick. |
nas4a2
Tuesday 20th December 2011 00:56 | Vis Insita |
| keep up the good work and i hope to see a nothere update soon |
| Sunday 8th January 2012 05:40 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| Yeah, me too. |
LeprechaunJV
Tuesday 20th December 2011 00:23 | Vis Insita |
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| Sunday 8th January 2012 05:40 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| Joy! |
TomRiddle
Monday 19th December 2011 23:38 | Vis Insita |
You my good sir, have extraordinary timing. You see, not 3 hours ago was I about to post a comment asking when the new update would be, and here it is.
I've tried to read other fanfiction in between your posts, but none of them come close to this. I love Scott, I love how you portray the canon characters. I've said it before and I'll say it again. I've read dozens of dozens of fanfiction, yours is the only one which I re-read on a regular basis, and to this day, remain the only fanfiction I've reviewed.
Brilliant Job
I'm off to start from the beginning, because as you know, nothing important happened today.
~Tom Riddle |
| Sunday 8th January 2012 05:40 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
You my good sir, have extraordinary timing. You see, not 3 hours ago was I about to post a comment asking when the new update would be, and here it is.
Plumbing the depths of coincidence.
I've tried to read other fanfiction in between your posts, but none of them come close to this.
You need to try harder, probably.
I love Scott, I love how you portray the canon characters. I've said it before and I'll say it again. I've read dozens of dozens of fanfiction, yours is the only one which I re-read on a regular basis, and to this day, remain the only fanfiction I've reviewed.
At the risk of sounding preachy, I might suggest you spread the love a little. There are plenty of authors out there who are much better than me and deserve some feedback of their own.
Brilliant Job I'm off to start from the beginning, because as you know, nothing important happened today. ~Tom Riddle
And I'm off to continue troubleshooting my new processor instead of writing. PC gaming is the pinnacle of the form, but such a pain to deal with sometimes. |
