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sonicdale
Wednesday 27th April 2005 14:15 | Mind War | Good start. I like seeing Harry out of his depth learning about the Japanese. That Ginny didn't know things about wizarding cats was a bit off - she's a witch, her mother's a witch - she would know.
As for the pregnancy, well, that does complicate matters, but it will be fun seeing how you write Veela preggers. The mood swings look fun.
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