gymnastgal19
Friday 29th August 2008 20:26 | The Battle's Done |
huh this is interesting... and slightly confusing... at least you wrote more on this lol
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chiantiqueen
Monday 24th December 2007 04:22 | The Battle's Done |
| Great story, can't wait to read the sequel to find out what's going on... |
pyromain
Friday 29th June 2007 14:17 | The Battle's Done |
| I really liked the story, the last line has me searching for an sequel because I just can't stop reading and hope there is one. Top marks from me for this story. |
crazyredhead
Monday 31st July 2006 11:20 | The Battle's Done |
| what i thought dumbledore was dead it is good but jumps around some i like it though |
fairylights
Sunday 16th July 2006 22:19 | The Battle's Done |
| More? Please? |
Arnel
Friday 30th June 2006 01:19 | The Battle's Done |
Oh, I sincerely hope there is more to this story than just this one chapter! Your characterizations of JKR's characters brings them to life wonderfully and makes me want to read more about them. As I was reading, I found myself feeling sorry for poor Crookshanks and hoping that Ginny does somehow find a way to smuggle him into Hermione's room--I think it would do both cat and mistress a world of good. This is a great story and I hope there's an update coming soon.
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Connor Landon
Thursday 29th June 2006 21:12 | The Battle's Done |
| I don't get the ending. There is more coming so that I will? Other than that, it was entertaining. |
platypus621
Thursday 29th June 2006 14:52 | The Battle's Done |
| Um, I don't really understand the ending or what Ginny got so mad about but other than that, its really good. |
GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 28th June 2006 13:18 | The Battle's Done |
| Nice story ... but left hanging at the end. Is there a sequel ??? |
critmo
Wednesday 28th June 2006 05:51 | The Battle's Done |
| Well written, but I don't get it. What session is Harry talking about, and where does this Deborah come in? |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 27th June 2006 13:22 | The Battle's Done |
| Oh. This is really good. I am going to read the next story. I hope that is good to. |
jessy
Monday 26th June 2006 05:52 | The Battle's Done |
wow!
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Wooster
Thursday 25th May 2006 12:27 | The Battle's Done |
Interesting...what does it all mean, I wonder...
Very well written...absolutely thrilling! |
YelloWitchGrl
Tuesday 31st May 2005 16:26 | The Battle's Done |
Very interesting. I am curious to see where you are headed and off to read the next chapter.
One small note, Filch (with Mrs. Norris) was not the caretaker when Mr.
and Mrs. Weasley were at Hogwarts. Mrs. Weasley states that in
GOF I believe. :-)
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Laurel Carmer
Sunday 29th May 2005 22:32 | The Battle's Done |
I had this, and a few other of your stories, recommended to me. I found, when I got here, that I'd read this before.
Anyway, sorry for not commenting before, but I really liked this and am off to read the others. You are a very good writer, please don't stop.
I'll comment a bit more on each story.
Laurel |
wvchemteach
Wednesday 3rd November 2004 23:43 | The Battle's Done |
I hope this story is the begining of something more between Harry and Ginny. It seems at the moment they are kind of dancing around each other. In some ways it's similar to Ron and Hermione during the 4th and 5th books without the fighting.
I'm always torn when I read coming together stories (I'm assuming that is where this is headed.) I know that for dramatic purposes it is good to draw out the couple coming together, but at the same time it is very frustrating for a reader especially if you know what is going on in the minds of both characters and know that simple fear of rejection is the one thing keeping them apart.
I look forward to reading the rest of your series. |
saugart
Thursday 29th July 2004 13:19 | The Battle's Done |
This is strange; it seems to be posted as a story, but has an apparent cliffhanger, such as is appropriate for the first chapter of a multi-chapter work.
It's interesting that Ginny is getting a taste of what it's like for Harry to have "I'm a killer" running through his head. That was an unexpected innovation.
I appreciate that you took the time to use good grammar, sentence structure, and spelling.
I look forward to reading more, if this is indeed a multi-chapter work. If not, it's still a fine piece of writing. |
| Thursday 29th July 2004 13:19 | The Battle's Done (Author Response) |
I'm glad you enjoyed my work.
I've tried to construct the Adventures In Living series as something more along the lines of a TV show in structure - more episodic than a novel would be. I hope I've managed to accomplish this successfully.
I hope you like the other four posted so far (Rest At Last, Gifts, Out Of The Shadows, and Under Your Spell) as well. Thank you for reviewing!
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