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bleeblahblee Sunday 4th April 2010 12:42 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 55
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This fits Draco perfectly, I love it |
| Steven Carnell Wednesday 5th December 2007 20:48 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 74
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| Just great! What a hoot! Draco dragged through the dirt! You are so, so, talented. I got a lot of fun out of this poem. Thoroughly enjoyed it, Well done! |
| HermioneWeasley1972 Wednesday 3rd January 2007 08:17 1st year Num. of Reviews: 6
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| Wow, this was truly amazing. Very well written. 10/10 |
| daniel_r_crazy22 Wednesday 20th September 2006 20:35 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 1230
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| Nice. |
| barbara_the_w Saturday 18th February 2006 19:49 1st year Num. of Reviews: 8
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heh
as if people can't figure this one out!
nice scansion! you made it all fit! |
Kelleypen Tuesday 21st February 2006 09:42 | 1: You're So Vain (Author Response) |
| thank you Barbara--it means a lot coming from you |
| Evelyn Monday 9th January 2006 06:14 7th year Num. of Reviews: 340
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| Fun, fun, fun...
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Kelleypen Monday 9th January 2006 06:18 | 1: You're So Vain (Author Response) |
| thank you, kindly ma'am |
| christian Monday 15th August 2005 05:13
Num. of Reviews: 340
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(as sung by Ginny Weasley of the LJ Wizarding Band Kate Kinsel and the Fellytones) Lyrics by Kelleypen, tune by Carole King. Apologies to Carly Simon, thanks to my beta--Antonia East, and my thanks for the inspiration--FellytoneK8 and Sannali . You walked into the dungeon like you were walking onto the pitch. Your hat strategically dipped below one eye, Your scarf was green but it itched. You had one hand on your wand shaft as you paraded yourself on by, And all the Gryffs feared that they'd be your partner, They'd be your partner, and . . . You're so vain, you probably think this song is about you. You're so vain, I'll bet you think this song is about you. Don't you? Don't you? You're father served Tom several years ago when you were still quite naïve. He promised he'd raise you to be one of Them, and that you would never leave. But he drove away the things you loved--for power and lust and greed. Trelawney had dreams there were terrors in your teacup, terrors in your teacup and . . . You're so vain, you probably think this song is about you. You're so vain, I'll bet you think this song is about you. Don't you? Don't you? ..... Well, I heard "Daddy" bought brooms for Slytherin team, so your assured place was won. Then you flew your Nimbus to catch the Snitch, but were blinded by the sun. Well, you're where you shouldn't be most of the time, And while you're there you plot some overthrow of all the Muggle-borns and half-bloods, Muggle-borns and half-bloods and . . . You're so vain, you probably think this song is about you. You're so vain, I'll bet you think this song is about you. Don't you? Don't you? Now you sit in Azkaban, your reward as a faithful son. Potter's won the war at last; Your work as a Death Eater's done. You did the things your daddy taught, but now he's gone and all that is left is just nightmares and vapors nightmares and vapors and . . . You're so vain, you probably think the song is about you . . .
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| Delani Saturday 5th February 2005 18:10 7th year Num. of Reviews: 319
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That was great! You've got me worried ; my parodies aren't the only ones at PS now! Well, you deserve the spot, becuase these are really great.
Hah, "You're so vain..."
Delani |
Kelleypen Saturday 5th February 2005 19:02 | 1: You're So Vain (Author Response) |
| I'm in very good company . . . thanks |
| Pugpal Tuesday 1st February 2005 14:11 4th year Num. of Reviews: 162
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Great job! Loved it! And I think I know who Ginnys singing about...but I'm not going to tell! |
Kelleypen Tuesday 1st February 2005 15:43 | 1: You're So Vain (Author Response) |
We'll just keep his identity our secret then. Thanks for the review. |
| Jedione Tuesday 1st February 2005 09:23 1st year Num. of Reviews: 40
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Great Job Kel! Well woven.
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Kelleypen Tuesday 1st February 2005 09:25 | 1: You're So Vain (Author Response) |
| thank you, sir! |
| Bring and Fly Tuesday 1st February 2005 06:34 5th year Num. of Reviews: 201
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Excellent! *punches the air* Your scarf it was green but it itched made me laugh out loud. That was so unexpected!
I've always thought it's very difficult to change lyrics and make them apposite for another character but this is totally spot on! You certainly have the knack for the mot juste in these.
I doff my cap to you, teach! To borrow a phrase, that was 'bloody brilliant'! Got any more? *puppy eyes* |
Kelleypen Tuesday 1st February 2005 08:04 | 1: You're So Vain (Author Response) |
Well, you read the other two, right? Okay, I'll see what else I can come up with. Thank you , your comments are very appreciated. |
| Aggiebell Monday 31st January 2005 14:39 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 101
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Oh, my, Kelley.
This is great--fits Draco perfectly. Love the mention about Daddy
buying the brooms for the Slytherin team!
And now the song is in my head...
~Julie
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Kelleypen Monday 31st January 2005 17:34 | 1: You're So Vain (Author Response) |
Glad I could entertain. Thank you for reviewing. And the little laughing guy is very gratifying.  |
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