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Friday 20th May 2005 16:12

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 416

Yes.  this one brings the intensity back up again.  Very well done.
Friday 20th May 2005 19:30
Falling (Author Response)
Thank you very much. I think this degree of intesity seems to be the most fitting. It is easier to see some things like that after drifting away briefly.
Friday 20th May 2005 10:22

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 599


This poem really reflects the uncertainty of how Lily feels about James.  It reveals the conflicts of youth as she tries to make up her mind.  Since we all ready know that Lily eventually "falls" for James, I'm enjoying this glimps into the in-between emotions between dislike and love.  I look forward to your next poem.

Friday 20th May 2005 11:01
Falling (Author Response)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I myself am very curious as to whether or not we are going to learn much about the in-between period. Until we do, I'm content to postulate.  Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Allie Kiwi
Saturday 14th May 2005 22:18

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 40


I really like the different reasons you attribute to 'falling' in this poem - it's every effective!

Looking forward to reading more of your work. 

Sunday 15th May 2005 11:56
Falling (Author Response)
Wow. After seeing you mention all my falling references, I got curious and rechecked my own work. One or two of those references must have been subconscious because this poem seems so much metaphorical than when I last read it a few days ago. Wow I guess even authors can miss such things sometimes. Maybe that is why I like being a poet. And, I shall look forward to you looking forward to my future work. (hint: the next chapter/poem won't be from Lily's PoV...)
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