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Thursday 11th October 2007 17:18

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise
lol that kitty is so cute!!! I want to steal it from teh story lol
Wednesday 23rd November 2005 02:29

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 692

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise
Clever girl, that Ginny.
Tuesday 28th December 2004 19:15

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 15

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise


Another cute chapter. Ginny has a secret admirer!

I liked that Harry asked her to sit with him at breakfast. (I suppose he wants to see her reaction to the gifts, but really, this is a good way to get to know a girl.)

I liked McGonagall investigating the owl and its package. Shows that she's on the alert and protecting her cubs!

Ginny is lucky that McGonagall chose to overlook the tiny rule about a student being able to have a cat OR an owl OR a toad.

A Mau cat? Nice choice. I thought it was cute, the way it "waved" at McGonagall.

It's cool how Ginny made up a bed for Isis. (I wish I could make up cat beds that fast! I suppose there's a charm for changing the litterbox, too?)

And I like the idea that it's crossed Ginny's mind that her secret admirer could be Harry.




Signed, your not so secret beta reader.


Friday 10th December 2004 17:30

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 162

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise


Tuesday 14th December 2004 11:28
Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise (Author Response)
Thank you all for your reviews.  I was thrilled to see them all.  We have a computer problem at home, but as soon as I am able I'll try to get Ch. 3 written.  I'm delighted that you all enjoyed it so much.  Thank You!
Thursday 9th December 2004 17:58

7th year
Num. of Reviews: 337

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise
A little fast paced romance going on ... but let's see where you go with this...
Thursday 9th December 2004 10:07

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 116

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise
Ok- maybe she won't take it so bad- good for her. Professor McGonagall took the whole thing very easilly- I would have thought she would have questioned the animals a bit more- like a owl, a cat or a toad  as their list originally indicated, but oh well. You have a nice beginning, and short chapters so you can develope a lot of characters and style here, good luck (in fact its a really great storyline- makes me all warm and fuzzy inside) so here's to the next chapter   
Thursday 9th December 2004 09:31

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 102

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise
This is off to a great start, J-1! 

I really like Harry's determination to have a good year and to live life to the fullest, and I like the way he's planning all this for Ginny. (What I mean to say is I like the way you have him actually thinking about how to woo her--all the planning he's doing shows us, at least, how much he cares for her.)  This is no small effort on his part, when you look at the list he made!

I'm looking forward to reading more (like how Harry keeps this a secret--I'm pretty sure that I would crack and let the cat out of the bag, so to speak).

Julie (who wants to give little Isis a hug, she sounds so cute!) 
Thursday 9th December 2004 04:55

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 668

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise

I love the names you've chosen for Ginny's owl and kitten: very appropriate, and I'm glad Professor McGonagall approves as well.  I'm rather curious to see what the reactions of Ginny's room mates will be as well as those of Ron and Hermione. (I hope Hermione won't get any ideas about reporting the cat and owl to have them checked for jinxes like she did Harry's Firebolt!)

Please post again soon.  I'm looking forward to more of this story.


Thursday 9th December 2004 04:00

6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise
Love the Egyptian Mau, of course!  Great work!

Thursday 9th December 2004 03:18

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 102

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise
Oh, Gods! I've gone and done it again!  Starting reading another not finished fan fic!   Why do I do this to myself?   Ok, enuf about my issues.   Great story so far and looking forward to more.
Thursday 9th December 2004 02:47

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 416

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise
This is working well.  I can't wait to read more.  Kelley
Thursday 9th December 2004 02:39

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 494

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise

 LOVED this!!! I simply adored it! You write really well!leasde update  really  soon!


Bring and Fly
Thursday 9th December 2004 01:19

5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise

This is shaping up for much intrigue, amusing misunderstandings and a lot more blushing on Harry's part. Who is going to tumble to what's happening first? The girls or the boys? What is Ron going to say about this?

I can't wait for the next chappie!

Wednesday 8th December 2004 19:54

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 158

Part 2: Ginny’s Surprise

This promises to be great fun!  I loved  Gilgamesh and Isis.  The list Harry wrote was cute, and the blush was even cuter!

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