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Sunday 11th November 2007 13:48

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 368

3: "Mah-ghee-kahl!"
Fun! I wonder it he'll be taking some Veela hair with him as well?
Sunday 10th September 2006 11:42

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1396

3: "Mah-ghee-kahl!"
"The unexplainable deaths show no cause of death on their bodies" -- presumably you are referring to Avada Kedavra, but Eirran already knows about that. So the old way is known as Dark Arts to Harry's time, but that would mean that the Light came later!
Is Caedric just a bad guy or a spy for Porto?
'"clay gaze" became "glaze."' -- interesting derivation ! Is that your creation?
Monday 29th August 2005 00:12

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 452

3: "Mah-ghee-kahl!"
I love your takes on etymology - and of course the veela had to sound like Fleur!   Anyway, I like your story as much as ever, and it's going to be great to see what happens to Willen, Constantia and Loundon's Towne.  I do hope he will make it in time.  Lucky Harry to fill his time with this kind of storytelling, combined with working for Mr. Ollivander and earning a few galleons (not that he neds it, though).  What will Ron say when he discovers what he's been up to all summer?

Evenstar Charm
Wednesday 25th May 2005 11:16

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6

3: "Mah-ghee-kahl!"
I LOVE this story and can not wait for the rest of it, with the hope that it will answer a lot of questions concerning the making of wands.   The imagination for working through the details is wonderful.   Please don't stop!!!   I want to read the end and learn how wizards and witches can be chosen by their wands.
Holly st.Raven
Saturday 14th May 2005 10:41

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

3: "Mah-ghee-kahl!"
Great story! No, bar that exelant story!

Still, you made one small mistake, that doesn't have to be a mistake at all. Actually, it could be said that J.K. also made a mistake of the similar sort.
You see, the Veela's are traditional Slavik mythical creature, and it would seem logical that they had spread with Slavik tribes, witch were, at that time, still living somewhere around Kavkaz (sp?) mountains. And as a sidenote, Bulgarians are not Slavik. They are turkish tribe that, when they moved to Balkan around 12. century, first Slavianized, before the Christianized.
Friday 13th May 2005 03:50

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 510

3: "Mah-ghee-kahl!"
Good chapter.
I like the fact that Willen is looking to make spells.
I'm curious as to how he's going to 'discover' how to put magical cores INSIDE of the wands. I guess I'll have to wait.

I like the little subplot with Harry noticing how the shop keepers bow to Ollivander. I'm hoping you continue that to completion.

This continues to be great. Keep up the good work.
Ima Quidditch Fan
Thursday 12th May 2005 15:18

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 195

3: "Mah-ghee-kahl!"
I'm not sure what else to say beyond this is delightful.  I just LOVE the descriptions, you are quite the story-teller and I am so fortunate to have found this one. 
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