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Tuesday 27th June 2006 16:34

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230

1. Living with the Enemy
What, how long have they been there?
Wednesday 28th June 2006 04:39
1. Living with the Enemy (Author Response)
They've been there about a year, perhaps a bit longer.
Connor Landon
Tuesday 2nd May 2006 11:08

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 188

1. Living with the Enemy
It's good, but you contradict yourself sometimes.
He was so used to it by now that he merely flinched as pain coursed through him.

The curse hit Harry straight in the chest and he immediately dropped to floor, writhing in pain. Searing agony shot from his hands, up his arms, through his chest, and spread to his whole body. He could do nothing to stop it and he bit his tongue to stop himself from screaming out in pain.

Or does this explain Harry's "immunity" of the Cruciatius?

Although now immune to most pain due to his final battle with the Dark Lord and the enchantment he placed on Harry, the pain of the Cruciatus curse was very real.
Wednesday 3rd May 2006 00:28
1. Living with the Enemy (Author Response)
It's kind of refreshing to hear someone criticize my work.
I had tried to imply that Draco's form of the Cruciatus was a bit more powerful than that of the other Death Eaters because of his hate for Harry. Harry was nearly immune to the Cruciatus, but their was the occasional instance where it still penetrated his defenses.
Sorry if it was a bit confusing!
Friday 10th February 2006 03:05

1. Living with the Enemy
your first chapter was on fire girlfriend!!!!!!!
Saturday 11th February 2006 02:41
1. Living with the Enemy (Author Response)
Thanx so much Bobbi!
Friday 27th January 2006 06:01

1. Living with the Enemy
hi from bob
you rock!!
Friday 27th January 2006 07:09
1. Living with the Enemy (Author Response)
Thanks bob!
Saturday 21st January 2006 14:43

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543

1. Living with the Enemy
What an interesting story! I love it. This is so cool. What a unique plot! I feel like Harry and all the students are like in the Holocust, I can't wait to see how the story develops. I have a quick question, has it been two years since that day on the train, or just two years since he had Mrs. Weasley's cooking? Because I know you said since Mrs. Weasley's cooking...I'm sorry. :rolleyes: I'm just being annoying. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can!
Sunday 22nd January 2006 01:30
1. Living with the Enemy (Author Response)
The Holocust was what I was shooting for--WW2 really interests me and I thought bringing that into Harry's world would be fun. I think that the "Mrs. Weasley's cooking" issue was that Harry wasn't quite sure how long it had been since he had had her cooking. Thanks again for reviewing!
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