This story is coming very close to making me cry, its good though. Although I could use the assurance that Harry isn't dead and that, at some point, he'll come back
What an exceptional and unique storyline. Ginny's story is heartbreaking and the way your writing draws the reader into the action, it can't help but tug on the heart strings.
Kathryn Wednesday 11th April 2007 04:05
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They say you hurt the characters you love the most, and things will get worse for her before they get better, so that speaks volumes to what I think of her as a character.
Ginny's heartbreaking in this story. Simply heartbreaking. She's so disconnected without Harry you simply can't help but ache for her losses. Poor thing. I hope she gets a happy ending.
I really like it. Your portrayal of Ginny is exactly on mark, imho. I can't wait to see how you develop her character as she goes through the stages of mourning. And, of course, the twist...is Harry alive, or isn't he? That's the question I can hardly wait to be answered until the next update!
Kathryn Friday 28th April 2006 23:38
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Your portrayal of Ginny is exactly on mark,
I think characterisation is the most important thing in fiction.
And, of course, the twist...is Harry alive, or isn't he?
I read both chapters this morning and have been thinking about it all day. I love Ginny's response to Harry's question in the Prologue and think she's very Gryffindor to tackle the refugee camp. I'm looking forward to more chapters no matter where your narrative takes Ginny because your characterizations of her and her family are beautifully written.
Kathryn Friday 28th April 2006 23:32
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I read both chapters this morning and have been thinking about it all day.
I'm truely honoured.
I love Ginny's response to Harry's question in the Prologue
I actually thought her answer may get a bit of a backlash.
and think she's very Gryffindor to tackle the refugee camp.
I think the one thing you can never doubt is Ginny's bravery.
I'm looking forward to more chapters no matter where your narrative takes Ginny because your characterizations of her and her family are beautifully written.
This is a really good story. I really like the time you take to explore Ginny's and others' feelings and emotions. Your writing style is engaging and draws you into Ginny's world of coping with her dreams. The initial angst is sensitive but hopeful .... not really dark, a hard fact to achieve. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story, ther seems to be so much more to go.
Kathryn Wednesday 26th April 2006 11:05
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Thank you.
initial angst is sensitive but hopeful
there are small parts of hope in all the angst.
I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story, ther seems to be so much more to go.
