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Saturday 26th May 2007 06:17

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 406

I really like your Regulus--he's so believable.
Monday 24th July 2006 04:27

You have hit on the crux of it!

That is a clever quote... would I be giving anything away if I asked if you did that on purpose? Keep up the good work, and quickly, because I am completely hooked. This is fascinating stuff.
Sunday 23rd July 2006 08:35

Great job!
Saturday 22nd July 2006 03:27

7th year
Num. of Reviews: 340

Ooh... This is going to end badly...

I have to wonder at Liam and Regulus' friendship. Regulus explanation for being friends with a muggleborn and being a Death Eater at the same time sounds like a very bad excuse. But then, I suppose that's just the madness you want to show, isn't it?

Well done so far, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Saturday 22nd July 2006 10:12
2 (Author Response)
Thanks! Regulus isn't really thinking, and it is a bad excuse. But, don't we all make up bad excuses for things to justify our actions? All the time. Keep watching for the next chapter!
Friday 21st July 2006 17:48

Oh, my dear Wings, this is just wonderful. I'm totally hooked on the story already - it's a brilliant idea - and you are such a good writer. I'm very impressed!! I really feel like I know Regulus - you give the reader great insight into him, in a very streamlined and coherent way. You've done a good job capturing the complexities not only of him, but Liam too (one of my favorite names, btw! and such an interesting character choice...a muggleborn slytherin, whoa!), as well as Snape, Pettigrew, Sirius, and the others who haven't played big roles yet. I'm curious to find out more about this spell stuff - you've got a really interesting angle that JKR doesn't explore much. Are you gonna take into account nonverbal spellwork? All I have to say is I hope your writing went well tonight because I'm loving the story! Here are *good vibes* coming your way for happy (and FAST!!!!!) writing! I can't wait to read more....
Saturday 22nd July 2006 10:15
2 (Author Response)
Thanks so much, Pawprints! I'm glad that you like it so far. Thanks for your comments on my characterization. I like Liam, too. More spell stuff is to come...
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