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Sunday 10th June 2007 11:52

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 31

2: First Impressions
Things are moving on for Oliver, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next but I'm a little worried about that bump on the head.

I'd say Catherine has done very well

Monday 11th June 2007 19:23
2: First Impressions (Author Response)
Hi dogstar!

Oh yeah, I'm a little jealous of Catherine. Thanks for reading!
Friday 16th February 2007 01:12

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

2: First Impressions
Very enjoyable. I often get bored silly reading Quidditch matches but this chapter kept me interested. I do worry about Oliver's head now, though! I hope he'll be all right. Loved his little gentlemanly display in the pub.
Sunday 1st October 2006 17:23

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543

2: First Impressions
I hope Oliver's alright, I'm glad he has someone to look out for him!
Sunday 8th October 2006 19:43
2: First Impressions (Author Response)
Hi SillieGillie,

We should all have an Uncle Will looking out for us. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Saturday 30th September 2006 09:58

7th year
Num. of Reviews: 340

2: First Impressions
My first impression wasn't wrong: this is a very enjoyable story! I really like Oliver's relationship with his uncle, and I'm curious about the other team members, how Oliver'll get along with them. Glad he's found a friend already.

But what is that about the coach's daughter? Maybe some ...?
Sunday 1st October 2006 15:56
2: First Impressions (Author Response)
Hi Evelyn,

So...the coach's daughter, huh? Should I give anything away? All right, you give me no choice. Yes. There is a bit of fluff ahead for Oliver. But remember, most of this is from Oliver's POV. (And that's all I'm going to say about that!)
Friday 29th September 2006 13:55

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 20

2: First Impressions
I'm definitely enjoying this... can't wait for the next chapter!
Saturday 30th September 2006 03:34
2: First Impressions (Author Response)
Hi Alena,

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Ch 3 is already with beta - and this one will have a little Oliver fluff, along with the drama.
Thursday 28th September 2006 16:57

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 102

2: First Impressions
I meant to tell you that I *still* giggle when I read the part where Oliver first gets to Puddlemere Headquarters. I can just see him trying to impress the receptionist--and his reaction when he sees that she's anything but impressed. It reminds me of some of the college guys I see around here.

I like your Oliver more and more each time I read about him. I like that you haven't written him as perfect. He's got flaws -- he's obviously got some issues to deal with (like with his father), and there's still a bit of immature boy in him (as evidenced by the scene I mentioned above), for example--but his flaws make him human. This all makes him a much more interesting character.

Thursday 28th September 2006 18:42
2: First Impressions (Author Response)
Aggiebell - my beta! After all your hard work, you still left me a review! Thanks so much. Poor Oliver. He does have a bit of growing up to do, but he means well. I so appreciate your help!
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