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clare
Wednesday 9th December 2009 18:06
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 78
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| Another story that is wonderfully rich in emotions - you are a very talented author. |
Kathryn
Monday 31st December 2001 23:55 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| thank you |
| blue_and_white_witch
Sunday 31st August 2008 04:33
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 92 | The Fall-Out |
| Wonderful story. |
Kathryn
Tuesday 2nd September 2008 01:37 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| cheers |
| pyromain
Friday 29th June 2007 06:26
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | The Fall-Out |
the troubles of parents. Greatly writen. |
Kathryn
Saturday 30th June 2007 08:47 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| thank you |
| brown_eyes
Tuesday 10th April 2007 03:19
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 108 | The Fall-Out |
| You really deal with the big issues dont you and keep a realistic twist to them. This is a very emotional piece that brought tears to my eyes. You have talent. |
Kathryn
Wednesday 11th April 2007 03:59 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| Thank you |
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Sunday 4th February 2007 08:48
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this was so cool! I\'m confused which family of Neville\'s it was. His wife & kids, or his parent\'s minds. oh well.nice story!
Au Revoir,
Pud |
Kathryn
Sunday 4th February 2007 08:58 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| That would be his parents and grandparents. |
| SillyGillie
Sunday 4th February 2007 05:32
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543 | The Fall-Out |
| Awesome job. I loved Harry's characterization. Really nice job. |
Kathryn
Sunday 4th February 2007 08:58 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
Thank you.
I'm glad Harry's character came over in piece with such a great focus on Ginny. |
| Uzamaki-girl
Friday 2nd February 2007 11:12
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99 | The Fall-Out |
| Poor Ginny. Excellent story.^^ |
Kathryn
Sunday 4th February 2007 08:55 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| Thank you |
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Friday 2nd February 2007 11:11
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| Poor Ginny. Excellent story.^^ |
Kathryn
Sunday 4th February 2007 08:54 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| Cheers |
| timbers
Thursday 1st February 2007 12:47
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 67 | The Fall-Out |
Really nice work dear. And I am also glad to see it posted here.
*hugs* |
Kathryn
Sunday 4th February 2007 08:54 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| Cheers mate and thanks for all your help. |
| Grandma Kate
Thursday 1st February 2007 11:07
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 966 | The Fall-Out |
Very well done. What a lot of insight is contained in this short paragraph-
"Silence filled the room for a couple of minutes, as they both appeared to be mulling over the discussion. She felt relieved at having had the opportunity to finally speak about her fears. Her worries had started to ease a little, instead of bouncing around her mind, increasing her fears and adding to her insecurities." Talking with your best friend helps. |
Kathryn
Sunday 4th February 2007 08:53 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
Talking with your best friend helps.
We truely would be lost without them. |
| GryffindorDragon
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:07
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1396 | The Fall-Out |
'all hers had escaped uninjured' -- what do you mean by unijured? What about Nagnini's biting her dad and Bill's mauling at the hands of Fenrir?
This is very well-written. You move nicely between the present and the flashbacks, very smoothly.
You make me feel very sorry for Ginny (perhaps a bit too sorry) and very angry at Warnock. I feel a bit like Ginny must fear for her daughter. I don't like that one of my character's has found out that life isn't always fair. She fears Alex will learn a lesson similar to hers. You must be a parent  .
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Kathryn
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:52 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
'all hers had escaped uninjured' -- what do you mean by unijured? What about Nagnini's biting her dad and Bill's mauling at the hands of Fenrir?
This is 27 years later and Ginny's pov. Her thoughts would be of a huge healthy family that gets together at The Burrow each week.
You must be a parent
No just a daughter and a sister. |
| Jess
Thursday 1st February 2007 04:40
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| A wonderful piece with such vivid characters. I would love to see a sequal, because it would be a shame for them to go to waste. |
Kathryn
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:49 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
sequal?
Not sure but these characters might come out in another one shot. |
| Lily Jane
Thursday 1st February 2007 04:03
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 34 | The Fall-Out |
Oh, you have really interesting problem here. I wasn't sure what to think at first, but now, I like the way Ginny finally accepts Alex's choice of career. It's not easy to come over jealousy and concern about your loved ones.
How do you do it, that you describe Ginny's emotions and inner turmoils so well? I've just read some of the rest of your stories, and the onlly thing that comes to my mind is that I'm impressed. Truly, from the bottom of my heart. |
Kathryn
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:47 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
I've just read some of the rest of your stories, and the onlly thing that comes to my mind is that I'm impressed. Truly, from the bottom of my heart
Wow, you are sending me red. Thank you so much. |
| jeanne
Thursday 1st February 2007 00:35
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 508 | The Fall-Out |
| The most important thing to come out of this fic, is that shattered dreams, bitterness and grudges, buried deep inside and never faced, eat away at ones soul , much like a small bad spot at the core of an apple does. In time the whole apple is spoiled, and so a person can be a shell of who they could have been. In my 74 years of life, I,ve seen it happen to many acquaintances, and it is sad to see it. Ginny also has what many don,t have, a partner who loves her as she is, and never gave up on her, although I bet he knew what she was feeling all along, if they were soulmates. Great one shot. |
Kathryn
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:46 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
What a thought-provoking review. And I agree with every word you have said.
Great one shot.
Thank you. |
| juliet
Wednesday 31st January 2007 22:50
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 303 | The Fall-Out |
| Glad to see this posted here. Although it is predominately a story about Ginny's reaction to her injury etc in Quidditch the bit I enjoyed most was seeing how knowledgeable and comfortable Harry was in his parenting role. |
Kathryn
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:44 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
Glad to see this posted here.
Thank you, so am I.
I enjoyed most was seeing how knowledgeable and comfortable Harry was in his parenting role
Somehow, I think Harry will make a great dad. |
| Curren
Wednesday 31st January 2007 21:21
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 120 | The Fall-Out |
| wonderful fic, so exciting to read. Hope there is more where that came from (be it sequel to this, or if this is a one-shot, more one-shots) |
Kathryn
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:40 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
Hope there is more where that came from (be it sequel to this, or if this is a one-shot, more one-shots)
More one shots with this set of characters is a possibility. |
| Kate
Wednesday 31st January 2007 18:02
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| Wonderful piece. You capture the emotions of your characters so well. |
Kathryn
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:31 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| Thank you |
| Emma
Wednesday 31st January 2007 17:50
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What a great piece.
Harry and Ginny's daughter is quality. |
Kathryn
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:31 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
Harry and Ginny's daughter is quality.
She is a fiesty character without a doubt. Very fun to write to. |
| Beth
Wednesday 31st January 2007 17:37
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| Excellent! |
Kathryn
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:30 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| Cheers |
| Trelawney2213
Wednesday 31st January 2007 16:45
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 106 | The Fall-Out |
"And when she faces the Falcons, she better give them a right royal hammering."
Fantastic, upbeat ending to such an angsty fic. Well done!  |
Kathryn
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:29 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
Thank you.
And publically, thank you once again for the super quick beta this time. |
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