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Thomas P
Saturday 1st August 2009 17:48
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2
| Order of Merlin First Class |
| great story. it cracked me up. |
| Astrid
Thursday 18th December 2008 04:58
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336 | Order of Merlin First Class |
| The glasses are so funny! I like the underwear he imagined for everyone. |
| hihavaniceda
Sunday 4th May 2008 00:26
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 184 | Order of Merlin First Class |
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| afpease
Thursday 4th October 2007 04:03
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 34 | Order of Merlin First Class |
Kind of light, kind of fluffy - I like it!
The twins doing their usual thing to keep life entertaining without thinking through how it might really affect Harry - especially with the way he feels and thinks about Ginny. Only the girls seem to take it all in stride.
I know I've read this elsewhere, but that was before I became brave enough to review.
Thank you for the story! |
| spoon13
Monday 13th August 2007 03:29
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 13 | Order of Merlin First Class |
| nice-perfect joke! did this link in with 'a christmas like no other?' |
| f4te
Wednesday 18th July 2007 18:01
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4 | Order of Merlin First Class |
| I was hoping this would be written after the version of the 7th book you wrote, but it was still wonderfully perfect nonetheless |
| BloodySeraphim
Sunday 8th July 2007 16:44
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 25 | Order of Merlin First Class |
| rofl, fred and georges prank was hilarious. really well done. too bad those cant be real...imagine them selling them as one of their products... |
| Illiea and Arya
Monday 26th March 2007 12:12
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | Order of Merlin First Class |
Great story! Some of that stuff had me laughing.  |
| FamousAmus8705
Friday 16th March 2007 04:34
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4 | Order of Merlin First Class |
| This was really cute. I usually don't review things, I'm more a silent observer, but I really love all your stories. For me personally, you're the best fanfiction writer I've come across. I think it's because you capture the characters so well, and stick to canon and make the stories believable within their universe, all while creating an original plotline. I love them all! |
Melindaleo
Friday 16th March 2007 09:28 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
| Well, thanks for taking the time to review! I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed the story - and particularly glad you find my stories believable. I really strive for that, so I'm thrilled when it's noticed. Thanks much! |
| DaFalcon
Saturday 17th February 2007 06:59
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 237 | Order of Merlin First Class |
Haha! I was thinking that same thing. I was very glad to see Remus and Tonks in this piece. Thank you! 
Don't think I hadn't noticed that you ignored my p.s. 
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Melindaleo
Sunday 18th February 2007 09:20 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
| Grin! Can't get anything past you, can I? |
| DaFalcon
Saturday 17th February 2007 02:20
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 237 | Order of Merlin First Class |
Melinda, I should have known you would find your way into this contest. And I'm not surprise that you placed in it. I love your stories. This was so hilarious. I laughed from the beginning straight through the end. I don't know how you do it, but you make me love HG more and more each time I read your work.
Tonks was my favorite character in this one. I love her interaction with Harry in the beginning. The whole step mother, and Harriella I think it was... that was so cute. You can tell that he's grown up a bit and trying to enjoy life after the war.
All the characters were great and right on point. Especially the twins. It's not very often they get the mickey taken out of them, and you seem to get that point across at the end there with Harry and the whole Ginny's red undergarments and stuff. They should have known better eh?
Congratulations on your win. Great Job!
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p.s. still looking forward to some one shots from TSH!  |
Melindaleo
Saturday 17th February 2007 06:29 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
Oh, thanks very much! It's a great compliment to hear I've strenghtened your h/g love in some way. I'm so partial to that pair  \
I'd originally started this piece (written the Tonks and Harry exchange, anyway) for a post-CotD story about Harry receiving his Order of Merlin. That story never went anywhere, but I thought that little exchanged worked well in this one - so there you go! My beta was just happy Remus and Tonks lived in this one! |
| Frenchy
Friday 16th February 2007 03:15
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 23 | Order of Merlin First Class |
HILARIOUS!!!roflol: I loved Tonks, you wrote her spectacularly!!
I'm speechless, it was absolutely AMAZING!! : |
Melindaleo
Saturday 17th February 2007 06:26 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really did have fun with Tonks in this one. |
| legobean
Thursday 15th February 2007 08:23
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 49 | Order of Merlin First Class |
Wow, I went up against the great Melindaleo. Your my hero.
I really like your story, and if my story is thrown out, I thought it was the best. Congrats on your awards.
I was slightly disappointed to learn that Ginny wasn't really wearing the red underwear......sometimes it's just mean to take these things away.
RED IS GOOD! |
Melindaleo
Thursday 15th February 2007 23:31 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
Aww, wow, thanks! That means a lot coming from the Member's Choice Congratulations to you! I loved your missing moment.
Hee, I could just picture the dazed sort of expression Harry's face as he mumbled, "Red is good." |
| Narumi
Thursday 15th February 2007 06:09
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 368 | Order of Merlin First Class |
| That was really cute! |
Melindaleo
Thursday 15th February 2007 06:39 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
| No Idea Why I Smile
Sunday 11th February 2007 23:03
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 72 | Order of Merlin First Class |
i about died of laughter when i read wha toyu had Tonks dressed in...and the twins...great, that is...
the ending was sweet...
and loved the Tonks/Harry time upstairs...her teasing him...Harriella...*tries not to smile, but it does not work*
loved it!
~*NIWIS*~ |
Melindaleo
Thursday 15th February 2007 06:48 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
| Well, I'm glad I could make you laugh! Your username sounds so sad! I'm glad you liked the "Hariella" exchange between Harry and Tonks. That has originally been written for a post-CotD outtake, but it worked well here, too. |
| chocoquills
Sunday 11th February 2007 22:43
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 14 | Order of Merlin First Class |
| Aw so cute! |
Melindaleo
Thursday 15th February 2007 06:42 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
| Sirius Lee Brilliant
Friday 9th February 2007 11:37
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8 | Order of Merlin First Class |
TA!! Funny!! Great story!!  |
Melindaleo
Thursday 15th February 2007 06:40 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
| Hoss
Friday 9th February 2007 10:22
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 179 | Order of Merlin First Class |
| The first one I have read. And what a great start. Thanks |
Melindaleo
Thursday 15th February 2007 06:46 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and that I got to be first! |
| Niffler87
Friday 9th February 2007 04:38
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 18 | Order of Merlin First Class |
| hahahahahahaha!!!!! Oh, that was so funny! Harry's line "red's good" was too funny. The entire piece - very well done and very in character. Loved it! |
Melindaleo
Thursday 15th February 2007 06:42 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Can't you just picture Harry drunkenly slurring that, simply high on the image, lol? I'm thrilled to hear you think they were in character. |
| CrumpleHornedKiwi
Thursday 8th February 2007 18:55
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 225 | Order of Merlin First Class |
That was just - cool.
I love it when the twins getted 'one-upped' |
Melindaleo
Thursday 15th February 2007 06:41 | Order of Merlin First Class (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I do, too. I like the relationship between Harry and the twins, and I like the idea of Harry getting the best of them on occasion. I also like to think of the glee on Hermione's face when it happens, lol. |
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