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Saturday 9th April 2011 01:00

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 152

I've only just discovered this story, and the Prologue is very promising Are you going to tell us what exactly happened between the two? Oh well, I'll just have to read on...
Wednesday 15th April 2009 01:25

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 37

Fantastic story! The characters are so well developed and the plot is very intriguing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Monday 13th April 2009 11:24

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 124

good start oh boy harry and ginny better be ready for what's coming to them what a screw up it is for two cousins to ruin their future family members
Monday 13th April 2009 00:06

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 81

great story so far... I thought i would't like seeing a non-Gryffindor Harry, but i think i like this mature and slytherin side to him.. Great work and we'll be waiting for updates
Friday 21st November 2008 06:43

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 151

So it's to be Slyth-Harry this time round. Go you! And I trust we can expect a Ginny-with-spunk who will give as good as she gets. Looking forward to it.
Sunday 23rd November 2008 06:28
Prologue (Author Response)
Yes, its Harry's time. The next chapter gives us some clues as to Ginny's charcater.
Friday 21st November 2008 00:54

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 110

Great start--nice to read a story where the Potters weren't all completely wonderful and fantastic and loyal and friendly and noble and helpful.
Of course, one bad generation doesn't necessarily invalidate the outstanding nobility of the family.
So, Cyriac and Joshua were cousins, eh? Probably doesn't make much difference to the future.
Sunday 23rd November 2008 06:30
Prologue (Author Response)
Yes, they're cousins, but it doesn't make a difference. Just a bad pair.
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