Oh, so far this is wonderful! I love how you worked Asteria in there as Percy's ex. Can't wait for that wedding. So funny too how Percy is playing up his sister's importance while keeping Harry's quiet. But, if she's done her homework wouldn't she know more about his family?
Antosha Wednesday 14th July 2010 14:20
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Oh, so far this is wonderful! I love how you worked Asteria in there as Percy's ex. Can't wait for that wedding. So funny too how Percy is playing up his sister's importance while keeping Harry's quiet. But, if she's done her homework wouldn't she know more about his family?
Well... perhaps the homework wasn't quite as complete as she thought.
I really enjoyed this story -- especially your take on Percy here. The back and forth between he and Audrey is very refreshing. I like the way you moved the story along with dialog rather than narrative. Thanks for sharing this.
Antosha Saturday 3rd July 2010 07:01
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I really enjoyed this story -- especially your take on Percy here. The back and forth between he and Audrey is very refreshing. I like the way you moved the story along with dialog rather than narrative. Thanks for sharing this.
Thank you for your feedback!
Part of the fun in imagining these two together was how different their voices were--Percy so stuffy, and Audrey so matter-of-fact--and so I found that the dialogue was the way to go.
This is the first of four installments by the way; I hope that you enjoy the others!
This is an excellent beginning to what looks like a really good story. I haven't seen very many stories about Percy. He is the "lost" brother of the Weasley Clan. I look forward to more of this story and the "romance" between Audrey and Percy. Thanks for writing. I really enjoy anything you write. Thanks again. p
Antosha Friday 2nd July 2010 11:02
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This is an excellent beginning to what looks like a really good story. I haven't seen very many stories about Percy. He is the "lost" brother of the Weasley Clan. I look forward to more of this story and the "romance" between Audrey and Percy. Thanks for writing. I really enjoy anything you write. Thanks again. p
Thanks so much—both for the general compliment and for the one on this story.
I'm glad you're enjoying this exploration of Percy—and hope you'll enjoy the rest!
