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Friday 3rd September 2010 16:22

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 28

2: Our Last Bit of Summer
I really enjoyed it!I can understand Harry's confusion...Can't wait for the next chapter
Saturday 4th September 2010 09:52
2: Our Last Bit of Summer (Author Response)
Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed it
Thursday 2nd September 2010 10:49

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1157

2: Our Last Bit of Summer
This is good. I like the fact that Ron has Harry thinking. He should be thinking about more than the physical side of their relationship. Ginny knows him very well. He hasn't had time to just be a teenager and this is his time. I'm sure Ginny will wait for him to grow up and tell her he really wants her forever in his life. This just isn't the time yet. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p
Thursday 2nd September 2010 14:53
2: Our Last Bit of Summer (Author Response)
I like what you said here about how this is Harry's time to be a teenager. Definitely. In many ways it does run deeper than that, but especially around Ginny, he's acting very much like a teenage boy would. He is able to feel as such for the first time in his life. Thanks for reading, and I appreciate the review.
Grandma Kate
Wednesday 1st September 2010 21:28

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 966

2: Our Last Bit of Summer
Ah, yes, the wonders of talking mirrors, especially at the Weasleys.

You've captured Harry's confusion perfectly. This quite revealing-
Who knew what he would want to do someday? Someday, he might want to holiday in China, but it didn’t necessarily mean he wanted to book his trip now.
Thursday 2nd September 2010 07:22
2: Our Last Bit of Summer (Author Response)
I had forgotten about the mirrors altogether. Once I was reminded, I had a fun time with it...Thanks; this is only the beginning of Harry's confusion! Love the quote! -R
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