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Rebecca Ripple
Thursday 3rd October 2013 09:37

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

I loved this! Oh, gosh... I think you showed me this once, but I found it again, and I really loved it.
Thursday 3rd October 2013 13:27
Splash (Author Response)
Yes, this was one of the stories I sent you, hoping you'd have time to pre-beta it for me. Thanks for reading and commenting on the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Saturday 13th April 2013 00:37

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 27

Very nicely done, this is one of the most enjoyable stories I've read in the R/H milleu. Thanks for writing and sharing it.
Saturday 13th April 2013 13:32
Splash (Author Response)
After I'd written the story of Harry and Ginny's simultaneous proposals, many of my readers wanted to know about Ron and Hermione. I'm glad you liked how I made their special day memorable. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Friday 5th April 2013 11:41

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 31

I really enjoyed this. Very cute and very well done.
Thursday 28th March 2013 11:54

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 152

Thursday 28th March 2013 17:31
Splash (Author Response)
I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for telling me.
Grandma Kate
Tuesday 26th March 2013 20:53

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 966

Charming! I like sincere Harry trying to do what's right. His conversation with George helped George make a needed change.

Ron's adventures in finding the perfect ring for Hermione were entertaining. He and Hermione had more adventures than they expected.

Molly's gift to Hermione of Auntie Muriel's long lost ring was a satisfying ending to the adventures.

Well done, Arnel.
Wednesday 27th March 2013 07:45
Splash (Author Response)
I'm sure you'll agree with me that changing things after the death of a loved one is very hard to do and George's hesitation about approaching Harry seemed to be something that would naturally fit in this category.

As for Ron and Hermione, I think this is just the start of their adventures together, but it seemed appropriate for her to be welcomed into the family by Molly giving her the recovered ring. I know my mother-in-law did just that; i have some very nice, small antique keepsakes that belonged to her family and it helped my own transition immensely.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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