This is a great story. I like how the dream evolves and seems to comfort Charlie as he endures the sadness and grief Fred's passing has created. The end sequence almost seems as if Fred is giving Charlie permission to be happy again because he himself is transitioning onto his next big adventure.
The Quidditch funeral was quite fitting, very Fred. I'm glad George wanted to do it that way. Well done.
Author by Night Thursday 17th September 2015 23:23
The Dragon King (Author Response)
Thank you for the review!
I had always imagined they would do something unconventional for Fred's funeral.